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Some students prefer classes with open discussions between theprofessor and students and almost no lectures. Other students preferclasses with lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v.1

Some students prefer classes with open discussions between theprofessor and students and almost no lectures. Other students preferclasses with lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v. 1
Of late it is observed that the majority of people are focused on making wealth rather than giving attention towards fitness. This has resulted in a substantial increase in diseases all around the globe. A lot of money is spent by countries on research and cure of such diseases which can be used in spreading awareness and other preventive measures. I personally believe if we include more physical activities in our lifestyle, it would rapidly curtail many diseases and save our money as well. There are a lot of diseases like diabetes and heart attacks which only occur due to the absence of physical workout, can be easily prevented by daily exercises. It is noted that the aforementioned diseases have very costly treatment so it only seems logical to keep such fatal diseases at bay by a simple change in daily routine. Secondly, improving eating habits also plays a pivotal role in keeping oneself fit. It eliminates issues related to digestion and gastric problems. Avoiding high calorie food, sweets and junk food can easily curtail a number of other diseases as well. There are other measures like yoga that not only keeps you physically fit but also improves your mental health. Issues like depression and other psychological diseases can be kept at bay by regular sessions of yoga. After looking at so many options to tackle these diseases, doesn’t it feel more logical to invest more time in preventive measures rather than cure? Yes, it surely does. To conclude, I firmly believe that it is preposterous to spend your hard earned cash on such diseases which can be easily eliminated by taking physical activities more seriously. Our focus should be on spreading global awareness of physical fitness rather than investing heavily on research.
Of late it
is observed
that the majority of
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people
are focused
on making wealth
rather
than giving attention towards fitness. This has resulted in a substantial increase in
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diseases
all around the globe.
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A lot of
money
is spent
by countries on research and cure of such
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diseases
which can be
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used
in spreading awareness and
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other
preventive measures. I
personally
believe if we include more
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physical
activities in our lifestyle, it would
rapidly
curtail
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many
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diseases
and save our money
as well
.

There are
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a lot of
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diseases
like diabetes and heart attacks which
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only
occur due to the absence of
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physical
workout, can be
easily
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prevented
by daily exercises. It
is noted
that the aforementioned
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diseases
have
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very
costly treatment
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so
it
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only
seems logical to
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keep
such fatal
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diseases
at bay by a simple
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change
in daily routine.
Secondly
, improving eating habits
also
plays a pivotal role in keeping oneself fit. It eliminates issues related to digestion and gastric problems. Avoiding high calorie food, sweets and junk food can
easily
curtail a number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
diseases
as well
.

There are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
measures like yoga that not
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only
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keeps
you
physically
fit
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but
also
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improves
your mental health. Issues like depression and
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other
psychological
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diseases
can be
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kept
at bay by regular sessions of yoga. After looking at
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so
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many
options to tackle these
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diseases
, doesn’t it feel more logical to invest more time in preventive measures
rather
than cure? Yes, it
surely
does.

To conclude
, I
firmly
believe that it is preposterous to spend your
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hard earned
cash on such
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diseases
which can be
easily
eliminated by taking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
physical
activities more
seriously
. Our focus should be on spreading global awareness of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
physical
fitness
rather
than investing
heavily
on research.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some students prefer classes with open discussions between theprofessor and students and almost no lectures. Other students preferclasses with lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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