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Some students like to work in groups with other students when doing assignments and projects. Other students prefer to work independently. Which do you prefer? v.1

Some students like to work in groups with other students when doing assignments and projects. Other students prefer to work independently. Which do you prefer? v. 1
Humans, being the only social animal on the earth, have a boon to think, plan and act logically. This skill is helpful to adapt to the changing times and thus survive satisfyingly. People finalising their career and working to achieve the same from their early years, exemplifies a person's ability to plan and work effectively to lead a successful life. Engineering and/or medical were used to be the most fancied choices of profession for the people, ages ago. They would burn the midnight oil to get good grades and get into their preferred organisation to be an engineer or a doctor. Attaining their goals have not only contributed to their satisfied working life, but have also, inspired the upcoming generation for long to follow the same path. However, the ongoing trend of walking the age-old path to be into engineering or medical field(s) has now resulted into oversupply of doctors and engineers more than their demand in the market. Moreover, the active global depression, resulting to layoffs from high paying jobs, is also causing to lessen the demand for such professionals. Such factors have forced the present technical graduates and medical professionals to venture into other suitable sectors to be able to earn returns on their study investments. As a result, several new sectors are gaining importance and thus availing new opportunities for the new generation ahead such as sports, media, fashion, entrepreneurship and many others. Hence, I can conclude that although setting an aim in life helps to develop focus and work, additionally keeping an open approach to adapt to the changing times causes one to make informed and effective preparations for the future.
Humans, being the
only
social animal on the earth, have a boon to
think
, plan and act
logically
. This
skill
is helpful to adapt to the changing times and
thus
survive
satisfyingly
.
People
finalising
their career and working to achieve the same from their early years, exemplifies a person's ability to plan and work
effectively
to lead a successful life.

Engineering and/or medical were
used
to be the most fancied choices of profession for the
people
, ages ago. They would burn the midnight oil to
get
good
grades and
get
into their preferred
organisation
to be an engineer or a doctor. Attaining their goals have not
only
contributed to their satisfied working life,
but
have
also
, inspired the upcoming generation for long to follow the same path.

However
, the ongoing trend of walking the age-
old
path to be into engineering or medical field(s) has
now
resulted into
oversupply
of doctors and engineers more than their demand in the market.
Moreover
, the active global depression, resulting to layoffs from high paying jobs, is
also
causing to lessen the demand for such professionals. Such factors have forced the present technical graduates and medical professionals to venture into other suitable sectors to be able to earn returns on their study investments.
As a result
, several new sectors are gaining importance and
thus
availing new opportunities for the new generation ahead such as sports, media, fashion, entrepreneurship and
many
others.

Hence
, I can conclude that although setting an aim in life
helps
to develop focus and work,
additionally
keeping an open approach to adapt to the changing times causes one to
make
informed and effective preparations for the future.
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IELTS essay Some students like to work in groups with other students when doing assignments and projects. Other students prefer to work independently. Which do you prefer? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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