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some student would rather write a paper than take a test. Other students would rather take a test. which option do you prefer and why? Use specific reason and example to support your opinion. v.1

some student would rather write a paper than take a test. Other students would rather take a test. which option do you prefer and why? Use specific reason and example to support your opinion. v. 1
It is certainly true that historical sites are attractive to all tourists, while only a few locals explore their local attraction. The interest in museums and historical places are very low in local people. However, some people discuss this point and consider why only a few native people visit their historical sites. Along with this what measures should be done for encouraging locals to visit these sites. There are many reasons for this. Since being long, many people are visiting their area and studying all historic sites for a long time, but now, no want to visit their local museums and historical places anymore. The locals already visited their attractions, many times and do not interest or curiosity anymore unlike tourists. Because of this less number of local visits to their museum. They prefer commuting far away for exploring new and many numerous things than their areas. All of these reasons support the point that why native people overlook their attractions and possess more interested in other faraway sites. Several measures can be adopted to appeal to the native people to discover their local attractions. Initially, promoting and introducing local museums in the media will arise an effective way of encouraging. When locals watch TV commercials about their local attractions, they will be more fascinated in those places and want to visit. Secondarily, offering some complimentary tickets or discounts for native people achieve another measure to stimulate people. It can't merely increase the number of native people visit historical sites, but it equally can develop the economy of a community. In conclusion, the familiarity of locals with their own culture and environment makes it difficult to promote and invite many natives to explore their local museums. However, with some promotions and creating recent exhibitions, the number of people explore their historical sites will ultimately increase.
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certainly
true that
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historical
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sites
are attractive to all tourists, while
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only
a few
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locals
explore their
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local
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attraction
. The interest in
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museums
and
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historical
places are
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very
low in
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local
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people
.
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,
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some
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people
discuss this point and consider why
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only
a few
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native
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people
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visit
their
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historical
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sites
. Along with this what measures should
be done
for encouraging
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locals
to
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visit
these sites.

There are
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many
reasons for this. Since being long,
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many
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people
are visiting their area and studying all historic
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sites
for a long time,
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but
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now
, no want to
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visit
their
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local
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museums
and
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historical
places anymore. The
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locals
already visited their
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attractions
,
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many
times and do not interest or curiosity
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anymore
unlike tourists.
Because of this
less number of
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local
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visits
to their
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museum
. They prefer commuting far away for exploring new and
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many
numerous things than their areas. All of these reasons support the point that why
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native
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people
overlook their
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attractions
and possess more interested in other faraway sites.

Several measures can
be adopted
to appeal to the
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native
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people
to discover their
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local
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attractions
.
Initially
, promoting and introducing
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local
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museums
in the media will arise an effective way of encouraging. When
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locals
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watch
TV commercials about their
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local
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attractions
, they will be more fascinated in those places and want to
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visit
.
Secondarily
, offering
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some
complimentary tickets or discounts for
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native
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people
achieve another measure to stimulate
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people
. It can't
merely
increase the number of
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native
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people
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visit
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historical
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sites
,
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but
it
equally
can develop the economy of a community.

In conclusion
, the familiarity of
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locals
with their
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own
culture and environment
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makes
it difficult to promote and invite
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many
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natives
to explore their
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local
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museums
.
However
, with
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some
promotions and creating recent exhibitions, the number of
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people
explore their
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historical
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sites
will
ultimately
increase.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay some student would rather write a paper than take a test. Other students would rather take a test. which option do you prefer and why? Use specific reason and example to support your opinion. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
305 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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