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Some peopre beft: eve lhey should keep oll the money they hove eorned ond should nol poy lox lo lhe sfofe. Do you ogree or disogree? v.1

Some peopre beft: eve lhey should keep oll the money they hove eorned ond should nol poy lox lo lhe sfofe. Do you ogree or disogree? v. 1
I disagree with the statement that individuals should not pay taxes to the state. The politics run the Provincial from the taxes it collects. Taxes are collected only from those who earn above a certain minimum Limit. The lot is our moral job to pay taxes. Cost money collected by power is used to fund basic amenities, provide various services to citizens And for ministry administration and projects, running of jails and defence system, and many others Operations. The lot is not wrong to say that "taxes run a province. " Thus, it is very important for a state to Make people pay taxes. Let us analyse why people do not want to pay taxes. The main reason is their dissatisfaction with Law in serving them. They blame government for things like lack of infrastructure, poverty and Unemployment, but they are not completely wrong as the cost, revenue is misused in some or the other way in Every country. In developed countries, however, because of higher satisfaction from power's Functioning, citizens may be more willing to pay taxes. Another factor generating dissatisfaction is the rate Structure itself. Often the tariff system is complex and it drives people away from paying taxes. Lot is also felt That the expense rates are high and contribution slabs are unequal. So they feel it is not unethical if one goes for tax Avoidance or tax evasion. Not paying taxes can drastically affect a provincial's revenue generation, my own home, Luanda, for that Matter. But then, it is equally desired that politics come up with a fair fine structure and also make People aware where the taxes are being diverted. Even lowering the levy rates can help a rustic increase Its levy collection as it would increase compliance among the taxpayers. Tariff reform should also be fast so That no public grievance or non-compliance remains for long. A proper commitment system backed up with strict price Laws can produce the best results. Summing up, I reiterate my opinion by saying that it is the office of every citizen to pay fine and the duty of Every government to use it appropriately in the public interest.
I disagree with the statement that individuals should not
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pay
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taxes
to the state. The politics run the

Provincial from the
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taxes
it collects.
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Taxes
are collected
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only
from those who earn above a certain minimum

Limit. The lot is our moral job to
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pay
taxes.

Cost money collected by power is
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used
to fund basic amenities, provide various services to citizens

And for ministry administration and projects, running of jails and
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defence
system, and
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many
others

Operations. The lot is not
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wrong
to say that
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taxes run a province.
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Thus
, it is
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very
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important
for a state to

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Make
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people
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pay
taxes.

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Let
us
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analyse
why
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people
do not want to
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pay
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taxes
. The main reason is their dissatisfaction with

Law in serving them. They blame
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government
for things like lack of infrastructure, poverty and

Unemployment,
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but
they are not completely
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wrong
as the cost, revenue
is misused
in
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some
or the other way in

Every country. In
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developed countries
,
however
,
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because
of higher satisfaction from power's

Functioning, citizens may be more willing to
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pay
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taxes
. Another factor generating dissatisfaction is the rate

Structure itself.
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Often
the tariff system is complex and it drives
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people
away from paying
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taxes
. Lot is
also
felt

That the expense rates are high and contribution slabs are unequal.
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So
they feel it is not unethical if one goes for tax

Avoidance or
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tax
evasion.

Not paying
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taxes
can
drastically
affect a provincial's revenue generation, my
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own
home, Luanda, for that

Matter.
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But
then, it is
equally
desired that politics
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come
up with a
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fair
fine structure and
also
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make


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People
aware where the
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taxes
are
being diverted
. Even lowering the levy rates can
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help
a rustic increase

Its levy collection as it would increase compliance among the taxpayers. Tariff reform should
also
be
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fast
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so


That no public grievance or non-compliance remains for long. A proper commitment system backed up with strict price

Laws can produce the best results.

Summing up, I reiterate my opinion by saying that it is the office of every citizen to
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pay
fine and the duty of

Every
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
to
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use
it
appropriately
in the public interest.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Some peopre beft: eve lhey should keep oll the money they hove eorned ond should nol poy lox lo lhe sfofe. Do you ogree or disogree? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
360 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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