Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.8
Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. v. 8
It is often argued that tourists from overseas must pay more than the local people to visit important cultural and historical attractions. I strongly agree that foreigners should pay more compare to local people due to some reasons.
Firstly, with tourists have to pay more for the attractions, it can help to minimize the number of visitors, especially the tourists, by all mean, it can prevent the attractions from being too crowded and keep the places clean. Many tourists are not responsible for what they did. For example, littering as they wish and damage the property. This kind of problem will make the place dirty and reduce visitors’ interest to come.
Secondly, the income from the tourists which are really high might be used to maintain the place regularly by the government. By maintaining the place, it may helps the place to stay in a good condition. Historical attractions and other monuments need some sort of preservation and special care to keep it in a good condition to long last. The government may give a special attention to the most popular attractions. For instance, when it maintained monthly it will give a fresh look. Place which is neat and beautiful can attract people’s attention to come.
To conclude, applying higher fee at cultural and historical attractions for tourists is required to avoid some unwanted problem such as the cleanliness of the places, but it should be controlled and take care of the place to draw people’s attention from all over the world.
It is
often
argued that
tourists
from overseas
must
pay more than the local
people
to visit
important
cultural and historical
attractions
. I
strongly
agree
that foreigners should pay more compare to local
people
due to
some
reasons.
Firstly
, with
tourists
have to
pay more for the
attractions
, it can
help
to minimize the number of visitors,
especially
the
tourists
, by all mean, it can
prevent
the
attractions
from being too crowded and
keep
the
places
clean.
Many
tourists
are not responsible for what they did.
For example
, littering as they wish and damage the property. This kind of problem will
make
the
place
dirty and
reduce
visitors’ interest to
come
.
Secondly
, the income from the
tourists
which are
really
high might be
used
to maintain the
place
regularly
by the
government
. By maintaining the
place
, it may
helps
the
place
to stay in a
good
condition. Historical
attractions
and other monuments need
some
sort of preservation and special care to
keep
it in a
good
condition to long last. The
government
may give a special attention to the most popular
attractions
.
For instance
, when it maintained monthly it will give a fresh look.
Place
which is neat and
beautiful
can attract
people’s
attention to
come
.
To conclude
, applying higher fee at cultural and historical
attractions
for
tourists
is required
to avoid
some
unwanted problem such as the cleanliness of the
places
,
but
it should
be controlled
and take care of the
place
to draw
people’s
attention from all over the world.
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24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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