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Some people use the Internet to search for solutions to their medical problems. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion and examples from your experience. v.1

Some people use the Internet to search for solutions to their medical problems. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion and examples from your experience. v. 1
Nowadays a part of the society utilizes the internet to find a way to solve their medical issues. this essay strongly agrees with the statement various examples will also be discussed to support the statement. Essay on Save Trees From childhood, we have heard that trees are our best friend, but in practical life, we didn’t see anyone who treats trees as their friends. Although they are the most valuable life source on the earth. They benefit every life form in a direct or indirect way. And the earth is connected to them to maintain a natural balance. In this essay on saving trees, we are discussing the reason why our friends need saving. They nourish us and protect us in many ways. Also, they keep our environment green and clean. So, it becomes our responsibility to repay them for the things they do for us by saving them. Besides, large trees are more beneficial than small ones because they capture more carbon, capture more water, combat the heat, filter greenhouse gases, gives shelter from heat and sunlight, etc. So, it can be said that we depend on them more rather than they on us. The human has become aware and serious about this issue and started doing the best they can do to save trees. The forest departments and government have banned the illegal cutting of trees. And they are going digital so that they can save paper which will reduce the number of trees cut down for making paper. In conclusion Apart from that, the forest area after cutting of trees should be replanted with new ones. Also, we should teach our children to plant trees and ask them to pass it on their friends and acquaintances.
Nowadays a part of the society utilizes the internet to find a way to solve their medical issues.
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strongly
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with the statement various examples will
also
be discussed
to support the statement.

Essay on Save
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Trees
From childhood, we have heard that
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trees
are our best
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friend
,
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but
in practical life, we didn’t
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see
anyone who treats
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trees
as their
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friends
.
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Although
they are the most valuable life source on the earth. They benefit every life form in a direct or indirect way. And the earth
is connected
to them to maintain a natural balance. In this essay on saving
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
, we are discussing the reason why our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
need saving.

They nourish us and protect us in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
ways.
Also
, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
our environment green and clean.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, it becomes our responsibility to repay them for the things they do for us by saving them.
Besides
, large
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
are more beneficial than
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
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ones
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they capture more carbon, capture more water, combat the heat, filter greenhouse gases, gives shelter from heat and sunlight, etc.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, it can
be said
that we depend on them more
rather
than they on us.

The human has become aware and serious about this issue and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
doing the best they can do to save
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
. The forest departments and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
have banned the illegal cutting of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
. And they are going digital
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that they can save paper which will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
down for making paper.

In conclusion
Apart from that, the forest area after cutting of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
should
be replanted
with new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ones
.
Also
, we should teach our children to plant
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
and ask them to pass it on their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
and acquaintances.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people use the Internet to search for solutions to their medical problems. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion and examples from your experience. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
289 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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