Education is believe to be part of basic social human rights for all citizens in a country, be it old or young. There are split opinion regarding admitting only young people with good grades into universities to study. Some believe that all ages should be allowed either they meet up with the required scores or not. However, both has its own pros and cons. Therefore, before commenting on my decision, both the opinion would be addressed.
Examining the former opinion, the primary argument the supporters would put forward is that for the young students, their level of assimilation is very high. This is because they have less things to disturb their mind, thus, when they gain admission they always perform excellently. Moreso, It is believe that they face less stress and do not fall sick often this help them to attend lecture always. For instance, a 40 years old students with age related illness will certainly miss class to keep up with his clinic appointment.
On the contrary, the latter view suggest that all age group should be given admission to study in the university irrespective of their scores because this will helps to reduce the rate of illiteracy in the society. In addition, they also believe that having equal right to education will prevent stigmatization and social isolation, besides, all ages can come together to discuss easily without any hindrance of understanding one another. Such as having wide knowledge on the topic discuss in the environment like prevention of environmental pollution.
To conclude and give my opinion, i would say that is much better to admitting fresher with high marks into universities first to study their course of choice, this would encourage other not to relent in their academic performance.
Education is
believe
to be part of basic social human rights for all citizens in a country, be it
old
or young. There
are split
opinion
regarding admitting
only
young
people
with
good
grades into universities to study.
Some
believe
that all
ages
should be
allowed
either they
meet
up with the required scores or not.
However
, both has its
own
pros and cons.
Therefore
,
before
commenting on my decision, both the
opinion
would
be addressed
.
Examining the former
opinion
, the primary argument the supporters would put forward is that for the young students, their level of assimilation is
very
high. This is
because
they have
less
things to disturb their mind,
thus
, when they gain admission they always perform
excellently
.
Moreso
, It is
believe
that they face less
stress
and do not fall sick
often
this
help
them to attend lecture always.
For instance
, a 40 years
old
students with
age
related illness will
certainly
miss
class
to
keep
up with his clinic appointment.
On the contrary
, the latter view suggest that all
age
group should be
given
admission to study in the university irrespective of their scores
because
this will
helps
to
reduce
the rate of illiteracy in the society.
In addition
, they
also
believe
that having equal right to education will
prevent
stigmatization and social isolation,
besides
, all
ages
can
come
together to discuss
easily
without any hindrance of understanding one another. Such as having wide knowledge on the topic discuss in the environment like prevention of environmental pollution.
To conclude
and give my
opinion
,
i
would say
that is
much better to admitting fresher with high marks into universities
first
to study their course of choice, this would encourage other not to relent in their academic performance.
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