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Describe an exam experience you had. You should say: - what the exam was - how hard you studied- how you felt the day of the exam- and say whether you passed the exam or not v.1

Describe an exam experience you had. You should say: - what the exam was - how hard you studied- how you felt the day of the exam- and say whether you passed the exam or not v. 1
It is obvious that the scale of tourism and trade is increased considerably compared to the past decades. Due to the rise of tourism and commerce some people emphasize the necessity of a single global currency. I completely agree with the opinion mentioned above. There are several benefits of a single global currency. Firstly, creating a single currency would facilitate and relieve the sophisticated, complex procedures between the trade unions and tourism facilities. Because, the currencies of different countries sometimes significantly raise and drop, that is why it is being a daunting task to aware of the real value of money. Moreover, unexpected financial actions, such as devaluation might make the calculation more complicated and tiresome. Secondly, innovation of single global currency would terminate some political conflicts which occurred among countries. For example, in recent years, especially after the oil prices dropped countries, such as Russia and Iran put forward the idea of using local currencies in global trade and tourism and now they are striving to achieve inaction of this rules in global scale in order to shun away the influence of the dollar. Due to that I believe that the creation of a single currency might be the one of the effective ways of solving this problem. Thirdly, integration process of globalised world would be accelerated by devising single currency. The European Union could be the best example for aforementioned notion. Since the euro created the annual amount of trade and tourism has been increasing between the member states. Because of the such mutual interest the member states are highly enthusiastic about building up close and solid relations. In conclusion, I opine that a single currency might ease our life as well as can root out the problems which encountered in recent years.
It is obvious that the scale of
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tourism
and
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trade
is increased
considerably
compared to the past decades. Due to the rise of
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tourism
and commerce
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some
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people
emphasize the necessity of a
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single
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global
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currency
. I completely
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agree
with the opinion mentioned above.

There are several benefits of a
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single
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global
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currency
.
Firstly
, creating a
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single
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currency
would facilitate and relieve the sophisticated, complex procedures between the
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trade
unions and
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tourism
facilities.
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Because
, the
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currencies
of
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different
countries
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sometimes
significantly
raise and drop,
that is
why it is being a daunting task to aware of the real value of money.
Moreover
, unexpected financial actions, such as devaluation might
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make
the calculation more complicated and tiresome.

Secondly
, innovation of
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single
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global
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currency
would terminate
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some
political conflicts which occurred among countries.
For example
, in recent years,
especially
after the oil prices dropped countries, such as Russia and Iran put forward the
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idea
of using local
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currencies
in
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global
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trade
and
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tourism
and
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now
they are striving to achieve inaction of
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this
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rules
in
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global
scale in order to shun away the influence of the dollar. Due to that I believe that the creation of a
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single
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currency
might be the one of the effective ways of solving this problem.

Thirdly
, integration process of
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globalised
world would
be accelerated
by devising
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single
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currency
. The European Union could be the best example for aforementioned notion. Since the euro created the annual amount of
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trade
and
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tourism
has been increasing between the member states.
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Because
of the such mutual interest the member states are
highly
enthusiastic about building up close and solid relations.

In conclusion
, I opine that a
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single
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currency
might
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ease
our life
as well
as can root out the problems which encountered in recent years.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay Describe an exam experience you had. You should say: - what the exam was - how hard you studied- how you felt the day of the exam- and say whether you passed the exam or not v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
295 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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