Libraries should focus on improving their technological resources rather than in building a large collection of paper books To what extend do you agree v.2
Libraries should focus on improving their technological resources rather than in building a large collection of paper books 2
While, majority of the people who believe that in today' s era computer and internet cafe' s are replace into number of books shelves. I strongly agree with the idea that it is better way for people to search the information easily by technology, I believe that e-books are playing major role in human life.
On the one hand, I feel that number of people who have liked to read the magazine' s and pamphlets through paper books than technology. Firstly, a lot of researchers think that rely on technology is no more beneficial especially for students in the contemporary era because sometimes it creates critical issue like slow processing or download, short circut, fall information and adversely effect on eyes. However, paper books are always print by the experts writer and provide the valuable data or experience which are more helpful for students.
On the other hand, the invention of the technology has changed the lifestyle of people and extensive study material is available on online websites which are very easy to collect and download within a seconds fraction of time. Secondly, students who are million of money and time on books, stationary, notebooks and so on in every year than through technology they can easily download or copy the notes. Besides this, according to me now in this era technology is very expensive, with people are easy distract from study by mobile notification and people who are not very affluent then they can not be afford it.
In conclusion, libraries mean sea' s knowledge and more concentration place specially for students, on the other hand, if authority are keep the technology inside the library then it natural people more distrub, become to lazy and expand badly noise.
While,
majority of
the
people
who
believe that in
today&
#039; s era computer and internet
cafe&
#039; s are
replace
into number of
books
shelves. I
strongly
agree
with the
idea
that it is
better
way for
people
to search the information
easily
by
technology
, I believe that e-books are playing major role in human life.
On the one hand, I feel that number of
people
who
have liked to read the
magazine&
#039; s and pamphlets through paper
books
than
technology
.
Firstly
,
a lot of
researchers
think
that rely on
technology
is no more beneficial
especially
for students in the contemporary era
because
sometimes
it creates critical issue like slow processing or download, short
circut
, fall information and
adversely
effect on eyes.
However
, paper
books
are always print by the experts writer and provide the valuable data or experience which are more helpful for students.
On the other hand
, the invention of the
technology
has
changed
the lifestyle of
people
and extensive study material is available on online websites which are
very
easy to collect and download within a
seconds
fraction of time.
Secondly
, students
who
are
million
of money and time on
books
, stationary, notebooks and
so
on in every year than through
technology
they can
easily
download or copy the notes.
Besides
this, according to me
now
in this era
technology
is
very
expensive, with
people
are easy distract from study by mobile notification and
people
who
are not
very
affluent then they can not be
afford
it.
In conclusion
, libraries mean
sea&
#039; s knowledge and more concentration place
specially
for students,
on the other hand
, if authority are
keep
the
technology
inside the library then
it
natural
people
more
distrub
, become to lazy and expand
badly
noise.
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