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Some people think that you can never become fluent in a language unless you have spent time living or working in that country. To what extent do you agree? v.3

Some people think that you can never become fluent in a language unless you have spent time living or working in that country. v. 3
Language is the medium to understand each other and share thoughts. Some people believe that fluency is the only result of living in that country or working together. I agree up to some extent. However, for some languages it is true, but as for English is a concern, one can straightforwardly learn in their own nation. To begin with, learning multiple languages is not an easy task, but if the people who wish to get an education. They can do it. There are 6500 languages in all over the Globe. For example, the Chinese language. For this a Chinese mentor is necessary because without a proper coach it is not easy to understand. Moreover, living in their country also encourage and able to learn early. On the other hand, the English language is a concern. It is almost used in every foreign region. Furthermore, in schools from primary to higher education all textbooks are in English. For instance, most all the software’s are developed in the English language, such as iOS and Android. Therefore, this does not need to live in a foreign region. This is common and used all over the world and easily understand by everyone. In addition, practice is the key to success. To sum up, there is no doubt that language is a significant element without this communication cannot be possible. Most of people are taking foot back because they do not understand and subsequently talk. However, some particular languages need greater attention and people around to talk. While, others such as English can be learned in their native town by the teachers.
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Language
is the medium to
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understand
each other and share thoughts.
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Some
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people
believe that fluency is the
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only
result of living in that country or working together. I
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agree
up to
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some
extent.
However
, for
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some
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languages
it is true,
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but
as for English is a concern, one can
straightforwardly
learn in their
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own
nation.

To
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begin
with, learning multiple
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languages
is not an easy task,
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but
if the
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people
who wish to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
an education. They can do it. There are 6500
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
in all over the Globe.
For example
, the Chinese
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
. For this a Chinese mentor is necessary
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
without a proper coach it is not easy to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
understand
.
Moreover
, living in their country
also
encourage and able to learn early.

On the other hand
, the English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
is a concern. It is almost
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
in every foreign region.
Furthermore
, in schools from primary to higher education all textbooks are in English.
For instance
, most all the software’s
are developed
in the English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
, such as iOS and Android.
Therefore
, this does not need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in a foreign region. This is common and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
all over the world and
easily
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
understand
by everyone.
In addition
, practice is the key to success.

To sum up, there is no doubt that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
is a significant element without this communication cannot be possible. Most of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are taking foot back
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they do not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
understand
and
subsequently
talk.
However
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
particular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
need greater attention and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
around to talk. While, others such as English can
be learned
in their native town by the teachers.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that you can never become fluent in a language unless you have spent time living or working in that country. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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