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Some people think that women should be able to join the army, navy or air forces like what men do. Others think that only men should do thatTo what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Some people think that women should be able to join the army, navy or air forces like what men do. Others think that only men should do that v. 1
IT IS CONSIDERED BY SOME PEOPLE THAT ATTAINING HANDWRITING SKILL IS IMPORTANT WHILE OTHERS BELIEVE THAT THERE IS NO SUCH DIRE NEED TO DEVELOP HANDWRITING. THIS ESSAY DISCUSSES BOTH THESE VIEWS. I STRONGLY FEEL THAT DEVELOPING HANDWRITING SKILL IS AS PIVOTAL AS HIS OVERALL PERSONALITY. ACQUIRING HANDWRITING AS SKILL HAS MANY BENEFITS IN LONG TERM LIFE. FIRSTLY, SCHOOL IS THE PLACE WHERE OVERALL DEVELOPMENT OF A CHILD IS OF UTMOST IMPORTANCE. IN THIRD WORLD COUNTRIES LIKE INDIA, PAKISTAN, THE OLD SCHOOL METHOD OF EXAMINATION IS STILL PREVALENT WHICH REQUIRES PAPER BASED APPROACH. AND TO SECURE TOP RANK A NEAT AND TIDY HANDWRITING ADDS ON TO THE SCORE. SECONDLY, HANDWRITING HELPS IN SCALING UP OF FINE MOTOR SKILLS AND COGNITIVE THINKING ABILITY  AS WHEN A PERSON WRITES HE TENDS TO THINK MORE AND IS ABLE TO PUT HIS EXPRESSIONS IN A BETTER WAY. LASTLY, HANDWRITING MAKES A CHILD MORE PROFICIENT IN LANGUAGE DUE TO HIS EARLY LEARNING CYCLE. IN RECENT STUDIES, IT IS FOUND THAT CHILDREN WHOSE HANDWRITING IS GOOD TEND TO HAVE A SHARP MEMORY THAN THOSE WHO DO NOT HAVE. ALSO, IT IS EVIDENT FROM STUDIES THAT CHILDREN WITH REGULAR PRACTICE OF WRITING HAVE INCREASE CHANCE OF GETTING ADMISSION INTO TOP RANK UNIVERSITIES. ALTHOUGH IN TODAY'S TECHNOLOGICAL ADVANCED SCENARIO, PUTTING EFFORTS TO UP-SCALE HANDWRITING IS CONSIDERED AS WASTE OF TIME, HOWEVER, THIS HAS MANY DISADVANTAGES TOO. FIRSTLY, IN DEVELOPED COUNTRIES, WHERE CHILDREN ARE TAUGHT TO USE DESKTOPS FOR TAKING NOTES, TO COMPLETE ASSIGNMENTS AND PROJECTS. HOWEVER, SINCE IT IS ALL IN CENTRAL PROCESSING UNIT OF COMPUTER WHICH IS MACHINE BASED AND HAS CHANCES TO CRASH AT ANY POINT IN TIME LEADING LOSS OF IMPORTANT DOCUMENTS. SECONDLY, WITH THE ADVANCED RESEARCH AND AWARENESS ON DEGRADATION OF ENVIRONMENT,  CUTTING OF TREES TO MAKE PAPER FURTHER ADDS ON TO THE USE OF TECHNOLOGICAL GADGETS. FINALLY KEEPING IN MIND THE TIME CONSTRAINT CHILDREN OUGHT TO USE COMPUTERS MORE EFFICIENTLY THAN PAPER BASED WRITING. IT IS UNDERSTOOD THAT TECHNOLOGY HAS AFFECTED OUR LIVES BY LEAPS AND BOUNDS, AND HAS REPLACED MANUAL LABOUR WITH ALL THE TECHNOLOGY STILL I WOULD STAND WITH OPINION TO DEVELOP HANDWRITING SKILL AMONG CHILDREN DURING THEIR EARLY SCHOOL DAYS. THIS WILL HAVE AN POSITIVE IMPACT ON THE LIFE OF A CHILD AND WILL HELP IN HIS OVERALL GROWTH AND DEVELOPMENT.
IT
IS CONSIDERED
BY
SOME
PEOPLE
THAT ATTAINING
HANDWRITING
SKILL
IS
IMPORTANT
WHILE OTHERS BELIEVE THAT THERE IS NO SUCH DIRE NEED TO DEVELOP
HANDWRITING
. THIS ESSAY DISCUSSES BOTH THESE VIEWS. I
STRONGLY
FEEL THAT DEVELOPING
HANDWRITING
SKILL
IS AS PIVOTAL AS HIS
OVERALL
PERSONALITY.

ACQUIRING
HANDWRITING
AS
SKILL
HAS
MANY
BENEFITS IN LONG TERM LIFE.
FIRSTLY
, SCHOOL IS THE PLACE WHERE
OVERALL
DEVELOPMENT OF A CHILD IS OF UTMOST IMPORTANCE. IN THIRD WORLD COUNTRIES LIKE INDIA, PAKISTAN, THE
OLD
SCHOOL METHOD OF EXAMINATION IS
STILL
PREVALENT WHICH REQUIRES PAPER BASED APPROACH. AND TO SECURE TOP RANK A NEAT AND TIDY
HANDWRITING
ADDS
ON TO THE SCORE.
SECONDLY
,
HANDWRITING
HELPS
IN SCALING UP OF FINE MOTOR
SKILLS
AND COGNITIVE THINKING ABILITY
 
AS WHEN A PERSON WRITES HE TENDS TO
THINK
MORE AND IS ABLE TO PUT HIS EXPRESSIONS IN A BETTER WAY.
LASTLY
,
HANDWRITING
MAKES
A CHILD MORE PROFICIENT IN LANGUAGE DUE TO HIS EARLY LEARNING CYCLE. IN RECENT STUDIES, IT
IS FOUND
THAT
CHILDREN
WHOSE
HANDWRITING
IS
GOOD
TEND TO HAVE A SHARP MEMORY THAN THOSE WHO DO NOT HAVE.
ALSO
, IT IS EVIDENT FROM STUDIES THAT
CHILDREN
WITH REGULAR PRACTICE OF WRITING HAVE INCREASE CHANCE OF GETTING ADMISSION INTO TOP RANK UNIVERSITIES.

ALTHOUGH IN
TODAY
'S TECHNOLOGICAL ADVANCED SCENARIO, PUTTING EFFORTS TO UP-SCALE
HANDWRITING
IS CONSIDERED
AS WASTE OF TIME,
HOWEVER
, THIS HAS
MANY
DISADVANTAGES TOO.
FIRSTLY
, IN
DEVELOPED COUNTRIES
, WHERE
CHILDREN
ARE TAUGHT
TO
USE
DESKTOPS FOR TAKING NOTES, TO COMPLETE ASSIGNMENTS AND PROJECTS.
HOWEVER
, SINCE IT IS ALL IN CENTRAL PROCESSING UNIT OF COMPUTER WHICH IS MACHINE BASED AND HAS CHANCES TO CRASH AT ANY POINT IN TIME LEADING LOSS OF
IMPORTANT
DOCUMENTS.
SECONDLY
, WITH THE ADVANCED RESEARCH AND AWARENESS ON DEGRADATION OF ENVIRONMENT,
 
CUTTING OF TREES TO
MAKE
PAPER
FURTHER
ADDS
ON TO THE
USE
OF TECHNOLOGICAL GADGETS.
FINALLY
KEEPING IN MIND THE TIME CONSTRAINT
CHILDREN
OUGHT TO
USE
COMPUTERS MORE
EFFICIENTLY
THAN PAPER BASED WRITING.

IT
IS UNDERSTOOD
THAT TECHNOLOGY HAS
AFFECTED
OUR
LIVES
BY LEAPS AND BOUNDS, AND HAS REPLACED MANUAL
LABOUR
WITH ALL THE TECHNOLOGY
STILL
I WOULD STAND WITH OPINION TO DEVELOP
HANDWRITING
SKILL
AMONG
CHILDREN
DURING THEIR EARLY SCHOOL DAYS. THIS WILL HAVE AN
POSITIVE
IMPACT ON THE LIFE OF A CHILD AND WILL
HELP
IN HIS
OVERALL
GROWTH AND DEVELOPMENT.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people think that women should be able to join the army, navy or air forces like what men do. Others think that only men should do that v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
380 words
7
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