Zoos represent both entertainment and educational place to go. Having zoos as important as museums. Museums are a showplace for art pieces that represent the culture of that country and zoos are show place for animals mainly belong to that country. Keeping wild animals could be a safety concern issue for some people, but with taking extra safety precautions, the problem will be solved.
Zoos are often an attractive place for both citizens and visitors. All age groups are interested to visit zoos. Kids in particular usually admired visiting zoos, they find it enjoyable to have a chance to see the animals and listen to the different sounds the animals can produce. In addition, this is a good way to educate the kids about animals, their names, shapes and habitats. Furthermore, that can stimulate them further to search and collect more information from the internet or books later on. Noteworthy to mention that zoos represent an attractive showplace for visitors to any country. In my opinion, having zoos is really valuable.
However, a safety concern is always raised regarding having wild animals in the zoos. There are many accidents have occurred in many zoos worldwide. Exposure the visitors to the danger of wild animals attack is definitely unacceptable. Although, it is a real danger, but with extensive safety precautions this problem can be overcome.
In conclusion, Despite the safety problem with having wild animals in zoos, The advantages of having zoos outweigh the risks. In addition, we have the ability to overcome that problem with extra safety precautions.
Zoos represent both entertainment and educational place to go.
Having
zoos as
important
as museums. Museums are a showplace for art pieces that represent the culture of that country and zoos are
show place
for
animals
mainly
belong to that country. Keeping wild
animals
could be a
safety
concern issue for
some
people
,
but
with taking extra
safety
precautions, the
problem
will
be solved
.
Zoos are
often
an attractive place for both citizens and visitors. All age groups
are interested
to visit zoos. Kids
in particular
usually
admired visiting zoos, they find it enjoyable to have a chance to
see
the
animals
and listen to the
different
sounds the
animals
can produce.
In addition
, this is a
good
way to educate the kids about
animals
, their names, shapes and habitats.
Furthermore
, that can stimulate them
further
to search and collect more information from the internet or books later on. Noteworthy to mention that zoos represent an attractive showplace for visitors to any country. In my opinion,
having
zoos is
really
valuable.
However
, a
safety
concern is always raised regarding
having
wild
animals
in the zoos. There are
many
accidents have occurred in
many
zoos worldwide. Exposure the visitors to the
danger
of wild
animals
attack is definitely unacceptable. Although, it is a real
danger
,
but
with extensive
safety
precautions this
problem
can
be overcome
.
In conclusion
, Despite the
safety
problem
with
having
wild
animals
in zoos, The advantages of
having
zoos outweigh the
risks
.
In addition
, we have the ability to overcome that
problem
with extra
safety
precautions.
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