There has been a significant growth in the number of skyscrapers the world over, particularly in cities. Even though many argue for horizontal development, I believe that vertical expansion is the only possible option in cities for the scarcity of land.
Proponents of the traditional type of city may argue that it is a better place to live. The primary reason is that a conventional house with a courtyard and a garden can provide plenty of free space and a sense of freedom to the resident. They believe that with these types of constructions we can establish a harmonious and direct relationship with nature. Furthermore, according to them, a detached and single-storey building offers greater safety in an emergency situation such as natural calamity or fire.
However, I believe that vertical building is the only choice in many cities, especially in cosmopolitan cities where there is a big shortage of land. For example, in Mumbai, in India, the housing issues could be solved only by constructing multi-storey buildings as they could efficiently accommodate more people in the limited land area. Secondly, the price of land is enormously high in big cities, and it is far beyond the reach of middle-class and common people. If high rise buildings are constructed, many people could fancy having an apartment well within their financial reach.
To summarise, in urban setting vertical development is the best option owing to the scarcity of land. The area thus saved could be better used for entertainment facilities such as parks and museums.
There has been a significant growth in the number of skyscrapers the world over,
particularly
in
cities
.
Even though
many
argue for horizontal development, I believe that vertical expansion is the
only
possible option in
cities
for the scarcity of land.
Proponents of the traditional type of city may argue that it is a better place to
live
. The primary reason is that a conventional
house
with a courtyard and a garden can provide
plenty
of free space and a sense of freedom to the resident. They believe that with these types of constructions we can establish a harmonious and direct relationship with nature.
Furthermore
, according to them, a detached and
single-storey
building
offers greater safety in an emergency situation such as natural calamity or fire.
However
, I believe that vertical
building
is the
only
choice in
many
cities
,
especially
in cosmopolitan
cities
where there is a
big
shortage of
land
.
For example
, in Mumbai, in India, the housing issues could
be solved
only
by constructing
multi-storey
buildings
as they could
efficiently
accommodate more
people
in the limited
land
area.
Secondly
, the price of
land
is
enormously
high in
big
cities
, and it is far beyond the reach of middle-
class
and common
people
. If high rise
buildings
are constructed
,
many
people
could fancy having an apartment well within their financial reach.
To
summarise
, in urban setting vertical development is the best option owing to the scarcity of
land
. The area
thus
saved could be better
used
for entertainment facilities such as parks and museums.
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