Some people think that they can make as much noise as they want, while others think that the amount of noise people make should be strictly controlled. v.3
Some people think that they can make as much noise as they want, while others think that the amount of noise people make should be strictly controlled. v. 3
It is often considered by many that they can make noises as per their wish, while other people believe that there should have strict rules to control the amount of noise individual makes. In my opinion, I think noise pollution causes ample social and physical issues, hence it should be controlled.
On the one hand, freedom to speak and making noise is one of the human rights. In other words, every citizen has a right to make sounds or noise as they prefer. For instance, in some special events such as birthday celebrations, dancing parties making noise is accepted in the current society. Moreover, making sounds is often considered as accepted behaviour especially among small children. Making noise provides enjoyment among people obviously during joyful occasions. It helps to ventilate one’s emotions, particularly anger and sorrow.
On the other hand, noise pollution is often accepted as one of the major concerns of the current world due to several drawbacks. Firstly, unpleasant sound causes ample health issues. For example, the high-intensity sound could cause increased stress level, deafness, cardiovascular problems and even sleep disturbances. Secondly, noise would often affect wild life. Animals would probably develop aggressive behaviour and get irritated due to the high-frequency of unpleasant sounds. To cite an example, during thunder and lightning pet animals became frustrated as a result of high pitch sounds. Finally, it leads to trouble communicating. In other sense, communication between individuals becomes difficult owing to noise from the surrounding. In other words, communication gets distracted.
In conclusion, the noise would adversely affect society and one’s body. Hence, necessary steps to be taken to control it. In my opinion, people should abide rules to control noise formation for the welfare of the society and inhabitants.
It is
often
considered by
many
that they can
make
noises
as per their wish, while
other
people
believe that there should have strict
rules
to control the amount of
noise
individual
makes
. In my opinion, I
think
noise
pollution causes ample social and physical issues,
hence
it should
be controlled
.
On the one hand, freedom to speak and making
noise
is one of the human rights. In
other
words, every citizen has a right to
make
sounds
or
noise
as they prefer.
For instance
, in
some
special
events
such as birthday celebrations, dancing parties making
noise
is
accepted
in the
current
society.
Moreover
, making
sounds
is
often
considered as
accepted
behaviour
especially
among
small
children. Making
noise
provides enjoyment among
people
obviously
during joyful occasions. It
helps
to ventilate one’s emotions,
particularly
anger and sorrow.
On the
other
hand,
noise
pollution is
often
accepted
as one of the major concerns of the
current
world due to several drawbacks.
Firstly
, unpleasant
sound
causes ample health issues.
For example
, the high-intensity
sound
could cause increased
stress
level, deafness, cardiovascular problems and even sleep disturbances.
Secondly
,
noise
would
often
affect wild life. Animals would
probably
develop aggressive
behaviour
and
get
irritated due to the high-frequency of unpleasant
sounds
. To cite an example, during thunder and lightning pet animals became frustrated
as a result
of high pitch
sounds
.
Finally
, it leads to trouble communicating. In
other
sense, communication between individuals becomes difficult owing to
noise
from the surrounding. In
other
words, communication
gets
distracted.
In
conclusion, the
noise
would
adversely
affect society and one’s body.
Hence
, necessary steps to
be taken
to control it. In my opinion,
people
should abide
rules
to control
noise
formation for the welfare of the society and inhabitants.
21Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes