Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion v.10
Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. 10
People have many different views about noise. Some people think that we should have some essential measures to reduce noise due to its negative impacts, while others think that there is no rule in making noise, so we can make noise as much as we want. I personally believe that both views have particular reasons about noise.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people like to make noise. Firstly, many people feel comfortable and concentrate on some various activities such as working and entertaining. For example, some of the people usually relax by listening music with the maximum volume of speakers to enjoy their favourite songs after a hard-working day even though they know, by doing this, it could disturb next-door neighbours. Secondly, some people think that noise is a part of the industrialisation and the modernisation processes, it, therefore, could not be avoided. Most of the urban citizens were perhaps familiar with traffic noise. Thus, they may argue that there is no reason to limit noise.
On the other hand, it could be beneficial in some ways if we have some strict controls about noise. Living in a place with too much noise could lead to some harmful impacts to their health. Some of my friends told me that they had no healthy sleep because of intrusive sounds from a nearby factory. If this situation lasts for a long time, it will lead to a deterioration in their mental and physical health. In addition, the productive of work can be reduced as a consequence of noise. Many workers complain that they cannot concentrate on their tasks because of constant noise from vehicles in the street.
In conclusion, it seems to me noise should be diminished to have a better life, even though some people insist on making a lot of noise without consideration for others.
People
have
many
different
views about
noise
.
Some
people
think
that we should have
some
essential measures to
reduce
noise
due to its
negative
impacts, while others
think
that there is no
rule
in making
noise
,
so
we can
make
noise
as much as we want. I
personally
believe that both views have particular reasons about noise.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why
people
like to
make
noise
.
Firstly
,
many
people
feel comfortable and concentrate on
some
various activities such as working and entertaining.
For example
,
some of the
people
usually
relax by listening music with the maximum volume of speakers to enjoy their
favourite
songs after a
hard
-working day
even though
they know, by doing this, it could disturb
next
-door
neighbours
.
Secondly
,
some
people
think
that
noise
is a part of the
industrialisation
and the
modernisation
processes, it,
therefore
, could not
be avoided
. Most of the urban citizens were perhaps familiar with traffic
noise
.
Thus
, they may argue that there is no reason to limit noise.
On the other hand
, it could be beneficial in
some
ways if we have
some
strict controls about
noise
. Living in a place with too much
noise
could lead to
some
harmful impacts to their health.
Some
of my friends
told
me that they had no healthy sleep
because
of intrusive sounds from a nearby factory. If this situation lasts for a long time, it will lead to a deterioration in their mental and physical health.
In addition
,
the productive of
work can be
reduced
as a consequence of
noise
.
Many
workers complain that they cannot concentrate on their tasks
because
of constant
noise
from vehicles in the street.
In conclusion
, it seems to me
noise
should
be diminished
to have a better life,
even though
some
people
insist on making
a lot of
noise
without consideration for others.
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