Few persons believe that the most precious thing about being rich is that a person gets chance to support another person who has a need. The sentence should be explained properly. I would agree on the given statement.
Rich people have a that power who can fulfil all the need which they want to. Now a day, wealth is the most important thing to bring all the happiness. There are many organizations which are handled by the rich people who help the needed persons. It is not the only duty of wealthy people to help others, there is a duty of government too. All the class of people should donate some amount of their income, in this way poor person will get help. If this helps, get successful many things will be affected like crime rate can be prevented, there were no lack of cash so that they can get the proper medical treatment. So, there are various benefits of getting help.
Another scenario is the misuse of this type of help. Few persons get the wrong benefits of financial help, they waste cash in wrong form. They waste the property on narcotic products which affect the nation too.
Therefor, there are some disadvantages which should be stopped.
In conclusion, I would completely agree with the statement that rich persons can help the poor people by means of any form. The help will enhance the development of the nation too. By the means of education help, human beings' personal development will become better too.
Few
persons
believe that the most precious thing about being rich is that a
person
gets
chance to support another
person
who has a need. The sentence should be
explained
properly
. I would
agree
on the
given
statement.
Rich
people
have a that power who can fulfil all the need which they want to.
Now
a day, wealth is the most
important
thing to bring all the happiness. There are
many
organizations which
are handled
by the rich
people
who
help
the needed
persons
. It is not the
only
duty of wealthy
people
to
help
others, there is a duty of
government
too. All the
class
of
people
should donate
some
amount of their income, in this way poor
person
will
get
help
. If this
helps
,
get
successful
many
things will be
affected
like crime rate can be
prevented
, there were no lack of cash
so
that they can
get
the proper medical treatment.
So
, there are various benefits of getting
help
.
Another scenario is the misuse of this type of
help
. Few
persons
get
the
wrong
benefits of financial
help
, they waste cash in
wrong
form. They waste the property on narcotic products which affect the nation too.
Therefor, there are
some
disadvantages which should be
stopped
.
In conclusion
, I would completely
agree
with the statement that rich
persons
can
help
the poor
people
by means of any form. The
help
will enhance the development of the nation too. By the means of education
help
, human beings' personal development will become better too.
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