Most of the people today view that it is the duty of the administrator to control the fatness of the youngster; however, others believe that parents are solely responsible for the cause. I am going to explain the dual views and explain my opinion in the below paragraph.
Firstly, People is having sedentary lifestyle and they don't have time to make a meal for themselves neither they can check the dietary intake of their child. The market is flooded with junk and packaged foodstuff with attractive advertisements. A recent study has found that the majority of the children of working parents are obese than the non working parents who have sufficient time to look after the meal of their children.
Secondly, the authority is considered as the parent body of the nation and the people are responsible to work with complying its rules and regulations. If the law banned the consumption of such crap cuisine strictly then the consumer must follow it, there is no way of purchasing it. Paying high tax on junk and its advertisement may be one of the solution of discouragement. In other words state should do more campaigns in school, colleges and the public places for anti junk food program; furthermore, mass media campaign will be more effective.
In a nutshell, Obesity is a dangerous symptom of non communicable diseases like blood pressure, heart attack and diabetes; however, this can be solved by the co-operation of both parents in personnel and the government at national level.
Most of the
people
today
view that it is the duty of the administrator to control the fatness of the youngster;
however
, others believe that
parents
are
solely
responsible for the cause. I am going to
explain
the dual views and
explain
my opinion in the below paragraph.
Firstly
,
People
is
having sedentary
lifestyle and
they don't have time to
make
a meal for themselves neither they can
check
the dietary intake of their child. The market
is flooded
with junk and packaged foodstuff with attractive advertisements. A recent study has found that the majority of the children of working
parents
are
obese
than the
non working
parents
who have sufficient time to look after the meal of their children.
Secondly
, the authority
is considered
as the
parent
body of the nation and the
people
are responsible to work with complying its
rules
and regulations. If the law banned the consumption of such crap cuisine
strictly
then the consumer
must
follow it, there is no way of purchasing it. Paying high tax on junk and its advertisement may be one of the solution of discouragement.
In other words
state should do more campaigns in school, colleges and the public places for anti junk food program;
furthermore
, mass media campaign will be more effective.
In a nutshell, Obesity is a
dangerous
symptom of
non communicable
diseases like blood pressure, heart attack and diabetes;
however
, this can
be solved
by the co-operation of both
parents
in personnel and the
government
at national level.
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