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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and polution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What ather measures do you think might be effective. v.1

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and polution problems. What ather measures do you think might be effective. v. 1
There is no doubt that transportation and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere. Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol. In this case, l personally supports this situation due to same relevant reasons. This essay will make an effort to explain some related and consequences of the circumstance. Firstly, oil and gas play a fundamental role in the industry. Undoubtedly, the growth of oil and gas fare will create new problems. But gas pay alone wile doesn't solve this problem. People dissatisfaction when the amount of oil increase because it will result in higher costs for the population and people do not like it. Increasing gasoline prices will not solve this complication at all. However, if rag cost goes up, the traffic will be slightly reduced, but that does not stop the service jam. Clearly, the solution to this question is not limited to this. May be, electric cars can help us solve this problems. If we use electric cars instead of ordinary cars, then gasoline consumption will be significantly reduced which will also reduce air pollution. So we only use fuel in factories, which is also very effective. We need a lot of electricity and we have to work harder to produce more electricity. If it also good for us that electricity is unrestricted because we can get it from wind pressure from water and sunshine which are constant natural phenomena. In conclusion, I think that gridlock and air pollution are a big obstacle for these people and it is important. It is not vessels trice gasoline bill in order to solve these problems. I hope, the increase in electric cars will be the most effective solution to this trouble.
There is no doubt that transportation and pollution from vehicles have become huge
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problems
, both in cities and on motorways everywhere. Solving these
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problems
is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.
In this case
, l
personally
supports this situation due to same relevant reasons. This essay will
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make
an effort to
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explain
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some
related and consequences of the circumstance.

Firstly
, oil and gas play a fundamental role in the industry.
Undoubtedly
, the growth of oil and gas fare will create new
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problems
.
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But
gas pay alone wile doesn't
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solve
this
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problem
.
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People
dissatisfaction when the amount of oil increase
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because
it will result in higher costs for the population and
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people
do not like it. Increasing gasoline prices will not
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solve
this complication at all.
However
, if rag cost goes up, the traffic will be
slightly
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reduced
,
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but
that does not
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stop
the service jam.
Clearly
, the solution to this question is not limited to this.

May be, electric
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cars
can
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help
us
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solve
Did you mean "these"?
this
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problems
. If we
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use
electric
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cars
instead
of ordinary
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cars
, then gasoline consumption will be
significantly
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reduced
which will
also
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reduce
air pollution.
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So
we
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only
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use
fuel in factories, which is
also
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very
effective. We need
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a lot of
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electricity and
we
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have to
work harder to produce more electricity. If
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it
also
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good
for us that electricity
is unrestricted
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because
we can
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get
it from wind pressure from water and sunshine which are constant natural phenomena.

In conclusion
, I
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think
that gridlock and air pollution are a
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big
obstacle for these
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people
and it is
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important
. It is not vessels trice gasoline bill in order to
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solve
these
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problems
. I hope, the increase in electric
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cars
will be the most effective solution to this trouble.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
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IELTS essay Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and polution problems. What ather measures do you think might be effective. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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