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Some people think that the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree. v.5

Some people think that the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. v. 5
It is believed by some people that increasing the prices of the fuel is the key to solving environmental problems. In my opinion, I completely agree with this statement. Firstly, this essay will discuss on how this decision can reduce the emissions of dangerous gases releasing into the air and secondly, explain how it can decrease the overall consumption of this resource utilized by human beings for industrial purposes. Increasing the price of fuel can reduce the number of vehicles travelling on the streets. This can prevent in emission of greenhouse gases, particularly from vehicles into the air and as a result, it reduces overall pollution, which is also one of the primary contributing factors in environmental issues. For example, the United Kingdom has recently surged the prices of the fuel and it resulted in lesser traffic and even showed significant difference in the air quality due to lesser hazardous gases released. Therefore, it is clear that increasing the cost can actually make a difference to tackle this problem. Another reason to consider inclining the prices of the fuel would directly reflect in the reduction of all other industries using fuel as a primary energy source. In other words, several industries use diesel and gas as a primary source of energy to provide electricity to their machines and now people will double check on spending hefty amounts which will eventually reduce the excess consumption of this resource and therefore look for renewable ways to run their machines. It is therefore playing a prominent role in tackling the contributing factors of environmental problems. Hence, it is patently evident that hiking the costs of the fuel is beneficial to the society. In conclusion, surging the prices of the fuel can tackle environmental problems as it reduces the vehicles that emit gasses into the atmosphere and overall reduction of its consumption which are powering up machines. It is recommended that more and more countries should take this initiative for a better healthy air in the world.
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is believed
by
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some
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people
that increasing the
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prices
of the
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fuel
is the key to solving
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environmental
problems. In my opinion, I completely
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agree
with this statement.
Firstly
, this essay will discuss on how this decision can
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reduce
the emissions of
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dangerous
gases releasing into the
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air
and
secondly
,
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explain
how it can decrease the
overall
consumption of this resource utilized by human beings for industrial purposes.

Increasing the
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price
of
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fuel
can
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reduce
the number of vehicles travelling on the streets. This can
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prevent
in emission of greenhouse gases,
particularly
from vehicles into the
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air
and
as a result
, it
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reduces
overall
pollution, which is
also
one of the primary contributing factors in
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environmental
issues.
For example
, the United Kingdom has recently surged the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prices
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuel
and it resulted in lesser traffic and even
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
significant difference in the
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air
quality due to lesser hazardous gases released.
Therefore
, it is
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clear
that increasing the cost can actually
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make
a difference to tackle this problem.

Another reason to consider inclining the
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prices
of the
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fuel
would
directly
reflect in the reduction of all other industries using
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fuel
as a primary energy source.
In other words
, several industries
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
diesel and gas as a primary source of energy to provide electricity to their machines and
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now
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people
will double
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check
on spending hefty amounts which will
eventually
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reduce
the excess consumption of this resource and
therefore
look for renewable ways to run their machines. It is
therefore
playing a prominent role in tackling the contributing factors of
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environmental
problems.
Hence
, it is
patently
evident that hiking the costs of the
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fuel
is beneficial to the society.

In conclusion
, surging the
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prices
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuel
can tackle
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environmental
problems as it
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reduces
the vehicles that emit gasses into the atmosphere and
overall
reduction of its consumption which are powering up machines. It
is recommended
that more and more countries should take this initiative for a better healthy
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air
in the world.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
333 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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