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Some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family. What are the advantages and disadvantages. v.8

Some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family. What are the advantages and disadvantages. v. 8
It is true that family-run businesses have never stopped gaining in popularity over the world. Although this model is applauded by many experts, it still exists some limitations. On the one hand, there are a number of advantages of family-run businesses. First, since the company is operated and overseen by family members, such as children and wife, or relatives, it is difficult for outside parties to steal the control of the business. This means that the family has an absolute control and power over strategic decisions, staffing or a payroll, which is of great benefits for all family members. Second, since family-run businesses are private corporations, they are not subject to complex financial complicating reporting requirements. As a result, the company can save a great deal of money on hiring a team of professional accountants to prepare external reports and deal with government stakeholders. On the other hand, family-run businesses are not without disadvantages. In fact, conflicts related to business among family members have the potential to sabotage any family relationships. For instance, the dispute over either business owner or salaries might lead to a quarrel or even an avoidable family estrangement. In addition, non-family employees working for family-run business might see the way of running the company is not fair to them. For example, even if they perform exceptionally well and make enormous contributions to the company, chances are they will not be recognized enough compared to those who are family members. In conclusion, given clear advantages that family-run business have, there are still some limitations. By acknowledging the limitations, the business owners can find the ways to dodge them.
It is true that family-run
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businesses
have never
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stopped
gaining in popularity over the world. Although this model
is applauded
by
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many
experts, it
still
exists
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some
limitations.

On the one hand, there are a number of advantages of family-run
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businesses
.
First
, since the
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company
is operated
and overseen by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
members, such as children and wife, or relatives, it is difficult for outside parties to steal the control of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
business
. This means that the
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family
has an absolute control and power over strategic decisions, staffing or a payroll, which is of great benefits for all
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family
members. Second, since family-run
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businesses
are private corporations, they are not subject to complex financial complicating reporting requirements.
As a result
, the
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company
can save a great deal of money on hiring a team of professional accountants to prepare external reports and deal with
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government
stakeholders.

On the other hand
, family-run
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businesses
are not without disadvantages. In fact, conflicts related to
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business
among
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family
members have the potential to sabotage any
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family
relationships.
For instance
, the dispute over either
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business
owner or salaries might lead to a quarrel or even an avoidable
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family
estrangement.
In addition
, non-family employees working for family-run
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business
might
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see
the way of running the
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company
is not
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fair
to them.
For example
, even if they perform
exceptionally
well and
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make
enormous contributions to the
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company
, chances are they will not
be recognized
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enough
compared to those who are
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family
members.

In conclusion
,
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given
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clear
advantages that family-run
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business
have, there are
still
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some
limitations. By acknowledging the limitations, the
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business
owners can find the ways to dodge them.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family. What are the advantages and disadvantages. v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
271 words
9
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 9.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 9.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 9.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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