The urbanization of city has bring both advantages and disadvantages. People have to spend more and more time travelling to and from work because of the expansion of cities. Some people suggest that apartment buildings should be planted near the city center to replace the parks and gardens. I think people should take more consideration of this idea.
On the one hand, if this idea can be well carried out, it could effectively reduce the commuting time for many workers. Living in the apartment buildings close to work can help save a lot of time since the commuters do not have to spend too much time on traveling. They can even walk to their offices, therefore they are no longer troubled by the heavy traffic in big cities on their way to and from work.
On the other hand, however, residences and workers might be bothered by other things. Since many people live just near the center, it obviously cause too much pressure for it. Just imagine what the center would look like when millions of people moved in or out of the numerous apartment buildings. The center would become more crowded and polluted than before. What’s more, people still need parks and garden to entertainment, and they have to spend even more time, maybe few hours or even longer, to travel to a place for taking a little rest. In the long term, people are not able to find the pleasure that is so important for their work and life, and the benefits they get from shortened travelling time would be undone.
In summary, there are some better measures could be used to solve this issue. For example, using advanced telecommunication technologies on work. So workers can work from home, which reduce their commuting time.
The urbanization of city has
bring
both advantages and disadvantages.
People
have to
spend more and more
time
travelling to and from
work
because
of the expansion of
cities
.
Some
people
suggest that apartment buildings should
be planted
near the city center to replace the parks and gardens. I
think
people
should take more consideration of this
idea
.
On the one hand, if this
idea
can be well carried out, it could
effectively
reduce
the commuting
time
for
many
workers. Living in the apartment buildings close to
work
can
help
save
a lot of
time
since the commuters do not
have to
spend too much
time
on traveling. They can even walk to their offices,
therefore
they are no longer troubled by the heavy traffic in
big
cities
on their way to and from work.
On the other hand
,
however
, residences and workers might
be bothered
by other things. Since
many
people
live
just
near the center, it
obviously
cause
too much pressure for it.
Just
imagine what the center would look like when millions of
people
moved
in or out of the numerous apartment buildings. The center would become more crowded and polluted than
before
. What’s more,
people
still
need parks and garden to entertainment, and they
have to
spend even more
time
, maybe few hours or even longer, to travel to a place for taking a
little
rest. In the long term,
people
are not able to find the pleasure
that is
so
important
for their
work
and life, and the benefits they
get
from shortened travelling
time
would be undone.
In summary, there are
some
better measures could be
used
to solve this issue.
For example
, using advanced telecommunication technologies on
work
.
So
workers can
work
from home, which
reduce
their commuting
time
.