In the last two decades, women have accessed and gained more place in the working market. Consequently, the time spent away from home and children has increased incredibly, which is a time that kids are not looked after by their mothers. Ultimately, young people will suffer problems such as increasing delinquency. In my opinion, being a working woman is not related to juvenile misbehaviour and this essay will explain why.
Primarily, since the 1990´s mothers have been getting jobs at increasing rates, henceforth they are receiving a salary. This income is not only helping the familiar daily economy, but also allows access to a private education which is clearly a safer experience for kids. For example, many paid schools have the benefit of a full time schedule, keeping children away from the streets. In summary, having a high household income, which is easily achieved when both parents work, reduces the chances of youth-related crime.
It is important to address that, although mothers spend long hours away from home to attend their jobs, it does not necessarily mean that they will neglect their children. Women have the ability to multitask in their activities and are more than capable of doing this correctly. Mothers can be there for their kids when arriving home, and from work as well. For instance, they can leave work to get them from school and take them to extracurricular classes. Not only by driving them, but also by helping them with homework and daily decisions, mothers are always taking care of their children.
In conclusion, I disagree with the opinion that the increase in female jobs nowadays, will have a direct consequence in the rise of crime among adolescents. Oppositely, having extra salaries and quality time with children at home can make them happy and keep them away from criminal activities.
In the last two decades, women have accessed and gained more place in the working market.
Consequently
, the
time
spent
away
from home and
children
has increased
incredibly
, which is a
time
that kids are not looked after by their mothers.
Ultimately
, young
people
will suffer problems such as increasing delinquency. In my opinion, being a working woman is not related to juvenile
misbehaviour
and this essay will
explain
why.
Primarily
, since the
1990´s
mothers have been getting jobs at increasing rates, henceforth they are receiving a salary. This income is not
only
helping the familiar daily economy,
but
also
allows
access to a private education which is
clearly
a safer experience for kids.
For example
,
many
paid schools have the benefit of a full
time
schedule, keeping
children
away
from the streets. In summary, having a high household income, which is
easily
achieved when both parents work,
reduces
the chances of youth-related crime.
It is
important
to address that, although mothers spend long hours
away
from home to attend their jobs, it does not
necessarily
mean that they will neglect their
children
. Women have the ability to multitask in their activities and are more than capable of doing this
correctly
. Mothers can be there for their kids when arriving home, and from work
as well
.
For instance
, they can
leave
work to
get
them from school and take them to extracurricular classes. Not
only
by driving them,
but
also
by helping them with homework and daily decisions, mothers are always taking care of their children.
In conclusion
, I disagree with the opinion that the increase in female jobs nowadays, will have a direct consequence in the rise of crime among adolescents.
Oppositely
, having extra salaries and quality
time
with
children
at home can
make
them happy and
keep
them
away
from criminal activities.