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Some people think that teaching methodology in the modern classroom should be based on experiential learning. While others believe that traditional approach is still the best. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion? v.2

Some people think that teaching methodology in the modern classroom should be based on experiential learning. While others believe that traditional approach is still the best. with the opinion? v. 2
Few people thought practical based coaching styles should be included in these days education system, on the other hand, people strongly argue that the classical strategy of educating students is even good. I strongly agree that an example based learning is an effective way of increasing our knowledge. This essay will firstly discuss the theoretical education system are incapable of providing vision to regarding topic, secondly, modern approach is easy to implement in technological development. Learning with examples helps to extend concepts regarding the topic ineffective way. whereas getting an education without practical knowledge makes us dull even we are unfamiliar with its simple application. The well equipped and practically good environment can make the pupil to catch a lesson easily, also it maximizes the performance and interest towards learning. According to the research, the Chinese and Japanese have a maximum school and college attendees than other countries because of their simplified and the new styles of teaching and learning. In addition, the student ability to boost up with such an approach even the weaker students are familiar with the subject. For next, the recent day' s technologies based on the learning approach. Though the old theories are implacable to give us an idea but without making it clear doesn' t give a track to start. All major developments are the contributions from the high school as well as college projects. For example, the law of floatation concept was developed many years ago, it' s easy to read, but when the students get concepts regarding ships and boats new modifications on such products are even easy. Practical learning makes them technologically sound to endeavor their concepts. In conclusion, the modern system with case-based learning increases understanding power of the students also motivate them for the development of new infrastructures based on their education. I believe a new education system with the exemplified approach is best than the traditional method.
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practical based coaching styles should
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days
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education
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system
,
on the other hand
,
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people
strongly
argue that the classical strategy of educating
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students
is even
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good
. I
strongly
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agree
that an example based
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learning
is an effective way of increasing our knowledge. This essay will
firstly
discuss the theoretical
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education
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system
are incapable of providing vision to regarding topic,
secondly
, modern
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approach
is easy to implement in technological development.

Learning with examples
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helps
to extend concepts regarding the topic ineffective way.
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whereas
getting an
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education
without practical knowledge
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makes
us dull even we are unfamiliar with its simple application. The
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well equipped
and
practically
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good
environment can
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make
the pupil to catch a lesson
easily
,
also
it maximizes the performance and interest towards
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learning
. According to the research, the Chinese and Japanese have a maximum school and college attendees than other countries
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because
of their simplified and the
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new
styles of teaching and
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learning
.
In addition
, the
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student
ability to boost up with such an
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approach
even the weaker
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students
are familiar with the subject.

For
next
, the recent
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day&
#039; s technologies based on the
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learning
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approach
. Though the
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old
theories are implacable to give us an
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idea
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but
without making it
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clear
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doesn&
#039; t give a
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track
to
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. All major developments are the contributions from the high school
as well
as college projects.
For example
, the law of
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floatation
concept
was developed
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many
years ago,
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it&
#039; s easy to read,
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but
when the
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students
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get
concepts regarding ships and boats
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new
modifications on such products are even easy. Practical
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learning
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makes
them
technologically
sound to endeavor their concepts.

In conclusion
, the modern
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system
with case-based
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learning
increases understanding power of the
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students
also
motivate them for the development of
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new
infrastructures based on their
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education
. I believe a
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new
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education
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system
with the exemplified
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approach
is
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best
than the traditional method.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people think that teaching methodology in the modern classroom should be based on experiential learning. While others believe that traditional approach is still the best. with the opinion? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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