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Some people think that social skills are as important as academic qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Some people think that social skills are as important as academic qualifications. v. 1
In the modern age, social skills have recently arisen as things which are equally important as academic qualifications for some people. As well as offering my opinion, this essay will discuss the importance of both academic certificates and social skills in future career. To begin with, academic qualifications properly have some advantages when it comes to mental assessment. Firstly, person’s professional knowledge can be reflected through educational degrees. Undeniably, that kind of qualifications cannot be gained unless they successfully experienced years of continuously practicing and learning. Although wrong judgments can be made if companies solely focus on those degrees, they are one of the good indicators of one’s ability. Hence, it is widespread contention that academic certificates are of great importance in first accessing a certain person. However, the significance of social skills cannot be denied in terms of working efficiency. To be more specific, well-developed social skills help people have more and better relationships because of making them more charismatic. In addition, mastering social skills facilitates their communication, thereby boosting working efficiency. For instance, if they do not like partnering with someone, social skills help them to politely convey that they want to work with others. In this case, they would not suffer working stresses and then deal with all kinds of challenges in the work. To conclude, this essay argued the essence of gaining professional qualifications and mastering social skills. From my own perspective, it is my belief that the significance of such things cannot be brought into comparison to see which one is more important because they have distinctively equal meaning to a person’s success.
In the modern age,
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social
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skills
have recently arisen as things which are
equally
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important
as
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academic
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qualifications
for
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some
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people
.
As well
as offering my opinion, this essay will discuss the importance of both
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academic
certificates and
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social
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skills
in future career.

To
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begin
with,
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academic
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qualifications
properly
have
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some
advantages when it
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comes
to mental assessment.
Firstly
, person’s professional knowledge can
be reflected
through educational degrees.
Undeniably
, that kind of
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qualifications
cannot
be gained
unless they
successfully
experienced years of
continuously
practicing and learning. Although
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wrong
judgments can
be made
if
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companies
solely
focus on those degrees, they are one of the
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good
indicators of one’s ability.
Hence
, it is widespread contention that
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academic
certificates are of great importance in
first
accessing a certain person.

However
, the significance of
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social
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skills
cannot
be denied
in terms of working efficiency. To be more specific, well-developed
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social
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skills
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help
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people
have more and better relationships
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because
of making them more charismatic.
In addition
, mastering
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social
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skills
facilitates their communication, thereby boosting working efficiency.
For instance
, if they do not like partnering with someone,
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social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them to
politely
convey that they want to work with others.
In this case
, they would not suffer working
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stresses
and then deal with all kinds of challenges in the work.

To conclude
, this essay argued the essence of gaining professional
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qualifications
and mastering
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
. From my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
perspective, it is my belief that the significance of such things cannot
be brought
into comparison to
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see
which one is more
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they have
distinctively
equal meaning to a person’s success.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that social skills are as important as academic qualifications. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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