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some people think that scientists experimenting with animals in a laboratory is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion v.1

some people think that scientists experimenting with animals in a laboratory is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe. with this opinion v. 1
many people many people argue that animal testing on Wheels product is completely ethical because it makes sure of human safety for the more it is often considered as the only possible solution in order to introduce new and safe products for us to utilise I completely disagree with this statement because I believe that not only it is unethical but also there are more fruitful ways Presley animal trials which were very popular in the previous decades have now been greatly replaced by more effective assessing tools that is to say with technologies like genetic engineering which has more researchers are now able to produce a variety of human friendly products without the need of any more Trial for instance in corporation and elimination of genetic material in the DNA has led to better developed medicines which are deemed safe or even if not tested on lab Rats that's why animal testing has been a thing of past in many important sectors like medicine Secondly because of a different genetic makeup animals don't behave the same way as human and therefore many animal based trials which are often subjected to a false positive result are not reliable and instead harmful to humans likewise most of experimentation is carried out for the sole purpose of making money rather than human welfare for instance many upscale cosmetic brands have lots which rely on animal testing is to produce better and that's profitable cosmetic products that animal testing is less reliable when it comes to the concerns regarding human safety while maintaining its need to make more lucrative product All in all all do still widely practiced animal testing is not only in human but also purposeless as it does not produce reliable results and sometime may cause harm to mankind I therefore believe that it should no longer be practiced
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argue that
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animal
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testing
on Wheels
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product
is completely ethical
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because
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human
safety for the more it is
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often
considered as the
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only
possible solution in order to introduce new and safe
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products
for us to
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because
I believe that not
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only
it is unethical
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also
there are more fruitful ways

Presley
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animal
trials which were
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very
popular in the previous decades have
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now
been
greatly
replaced by more effective assessing tools
that is
to say with technologies like genetic engineering which has more researchers are
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now
able to produce a variety of
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human
friendly
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products
without the need of any more Trial
for instance
in corporation and elimination of genetic material in the DNA has led to better developed medicines which
are deemed
safe or even if not
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tested
on lab Rats that's why
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animal
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testing
has been a thing of past in
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important
sectors like medicine

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of a
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different
genetic makeup
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animals
don't behave the same way as
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human
and
therefore
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animal
based trials which are
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positive
result are not reliable and
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humans
likewise
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welfare
for instance
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many
upscale cosmetic brands have lots which rely on
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animal
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testing
is to produce better and that's profitable cosmetic
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products
that
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animal
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testing
is less reliable when it
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comes
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human
safety while maintaining its need to
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make
more lucrative product

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in
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also
purposeless as it does not produce reliable results and sometime may cause harm to mankind I
therefore
believe that it should no longer
be practiced
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IELTS essay some people think that scientists experimenting with animals in a laboratory is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe. with this opinion v. 1

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
308 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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