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Some people think that scientists experimenting with animals in a laboratory is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe for human use. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? v.2

Some people think that scientists experimenting with animals in a laboratory is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe for human use. with this opinion? v. 2
Nowadays, laboratory experiments have become increasingly popular. Some people believe that trying Medicine on animals is the only way we can make sure that new products will be safe for human. This essay will elaborate why laboratory experimenting with animal saves many people's lives, despite the detrimental effects on animals' health. As well as, provide evidence as to why trying Medicine on animals more beneficial than on human beings. Doing medical experiments on animals saves many human lives. For many years now, scientists have been working hard to develop cures for many diseases. This helps with saving many souls, as the scientists find treatments for spreading illnesses. As well as, prevent people death, which may result from experimental try on humans. In fact, scientists Currently guards many lives from many catastrophic epidemics: H1N1, malaria, and corona virus. Therefore, doing trial experiments on animals is crucial for human beings. While applying new Medicine on animals has many outcomes, it has drawbacks on fauna life. Putting animals in cages dramatically affects on animals' psychology. In addition to, doing experiments on rats leads to alteration on their genes. Although the experiment protects human from many diseases, it leads to spread lots of epidemics in the animal world. For instance, the last Harvard university research has concluded there is new resistant disease in newly born rats. For these reasons, fauna world is badly affected by laboratory experiments. In conclusion, there is no denying how important role laboratory experiments on animals play, eventually. Some people think that scientists experimenting with animals in a laboratory are the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe for human use. This essay discussed how These experiments save many peoples' souls. This essay also showed the dramatic effects on animals' health. From my point of view, it is better to try new Medicine on animals rather than human, as no one wants to put man in cages instead of animals.
Nowadays,
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laboratory
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experiments
have become
increasingly
popular.
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Some
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people
believe that trying
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Medicine
on
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animals
is the
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only
way we can
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make
sure that
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new
products will be safe for
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human
. This essay will elaborate why
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laboratory
experimenting with
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animal
saves
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many
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people
's
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lives
, despite the detrimental effects on animals' health.
As well
as, provide evidence as to why trying
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Medicine
on
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animals
more beneficial than on
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human
beings.

Doing medical
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experiments
on
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animals
saves
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many
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human
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lives
. For
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many
years
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now
,
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scientists
have been working
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hard
to develop cures for
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many
diseases. This
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helps
with saving
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many
souls, as the
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scientists
find treatments for spreading illnesses.
As well
as,
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prevent
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people
death, which may result from experimental try on
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humans
. In fact,
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scientists
Currently
guards
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many
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lives
from
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many
catastrophic epidemics: H1N1, malaria, and
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corona virus
.
Therefore
, doing trial
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experiments
on
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animals
is crucial for
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human
beings.

While applying
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new
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Medicine
on
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animals
has
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many
outcomes, it has drawbacks on fauna life. Putting
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animals
in cages
dramatically
affects on animals' psychology.
In addition
to, doing
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experiments
on rats leads to alteration on their genes. Although the
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experiment
protects
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human
from
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many
diseases, it leads to spread lots of epidemics in the
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animal
world.
For instance
, the last
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Harvard university
research has concluded there is
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new
resistant disease in
newly
born rats. For these reasons, fauna world is
badly
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affected
by
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laboratory
experiments.

In conclusion
, there is no denying how
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important
role
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laboratory
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experiments
on
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animals
play,
eventually
.
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Some
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people
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think
that
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scientists
experimenting with
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animals
in a
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laboratory
are the
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only
way we can guarantee
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new
products will be safe for
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human
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use
. This essay discussed how These
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experiments
save
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many
peoples' souls. This essay
also
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showed
the dramatic effects on animals' health. From my point of view, it is better to try
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new
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Medicine
on
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animals
rather
than
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human
, as no one wants to put
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man
in cages
instead
of
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animals
.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
45Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that scientists experimenting with animals in a laboratory is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe for human use. with this opinion? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
323 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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