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Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.4

Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose. v. 4
Over the past decade, there has been a drastic revolution observed in the media field. There are two dimensions of the topic, one group of people is of the view that radio is one efficient medium to get news; whereas, other group asserts on the importance of Television. This essay shall discuss both perspectives in details before reaching a final verdict. To begin with, Radio is one standard medium of media and news that never gets outdated. It is still considered to be the best channel whenever anyone wants to latch on to the latest news circulating around the air. It is renowned owing to its easy mobility and pocket friendly. For example, even people with low class income can afford a radio in order to get entertained, listen to live cricket commentary or news about current affairs. On the other side, Television is the advance version of communication channel for masses. One cannot overlook the importance and usefulness of TV; when it comes to visualization and sound quality. Using Television as compared to Radio or other medium is certainly more advantageous. For instance, people would be more satisfied and delighted to see the video of event or exciting news instead of just listening and visualizing the images in mind. To conclude the aforementioned argument, I opine that Television usage and advantages certainly outweighs the advantages of radio. Owing to the features, visual technology such as LED & HD has raisin the bar of quality and productivity of Television. In future, people would be more inclined to use Television as an entertainment medium instead of Radio or other gadgets.
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is one efficient
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medium
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get
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news
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other
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Television
. This essay shall discuss both perspectives in
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details
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before
reaching a final verdict.

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Radio
is one standard
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medium
of media and
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news
that never
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gets
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news
circulating around the air. It
is renowned
owing to its easy mobility and pocket friendly.
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people
with low
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class
income can afford a
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radio
in order to
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get
entertained, listen to
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live
cricket commentary or
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news
about
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current
affairs.

On the
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side,
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Television
is the advance version of communication channel for masses. One cannot overlook the importance and usefulness of TV; when it
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comes
to visualization and sound quality. Using
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as compared to
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or
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people
would be more satisfied and delighted to
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the video of
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event
or exciting
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news
instead
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just
listening and visualizing the images in mind.

To conclude
the aforementioned argument, I opine that
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Television
usage and advantages
certainly
outweighs the advantages of
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radio
. Owing to the features, visual technology such as LED
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.
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,
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would be more inclined to
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use
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as an entertainment
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or
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gadgets.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
269 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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