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Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.3

Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose. v. 3
Now a day, pollution is increasing at an alarming rate. The main reason behind is the invention of new technologies. Human being, it is the culprit for this situation. Every single day, we are setting up the industries, building houses or any fulfilling our needs. In today’s essay, I will be discussing whether trees should be planted in the vacant areas of the cities and others believe that we should construct housing facilities there. My personal opinion will be to plant more and more trees in the bare land of cities and towns. Due to the rapid growth of population the demand for housing is increasing. We can see the air quality what we have now a days. The proportion of carbon dioxide is more with respect to oxygen in the air, which is resulting in breathing problem. In today’s era, each family owns two to three vehicles. The count of transportation on the road is high, leading to pollution. In every empty land, a person is desired to construct which can give them benefits. They are not thinking about the nature. In order to overcome these problems, every individual should contribute equally in the environment growth. Each of one should start growing more and more trees wherever possible. We can maintain both urban development and environment protection hand in hand. For instance, Singapore is maintained by planting trees on the roof of their build and they have opted for vertical plantation which can continue to maintain the green life of the city. In conclusion, although residence expansion is necessary in cities, governments should attach a great importance to developing green spaces.
Now
a day, pollution is increasing at an alarming rate. The main reason behind is the invention of new technologies. Human being, it is the culprit for this situation. Every single day, we are setting up the industries, building
houses
or any fulfilling our needs. In
today
’s essay, I will be discussing whether
trees
should
be planted
in the vacant areas of the cities
and others
believe that we should construct housing facilities there. My personal opinion will be to plant more and more
trees
in the bare land of cities and towns.

Due to the rapid growth of population the demand for housing is increasing. We can
see
the air quality what we have
now a days
. The proportion of carbon dioxide is more with respect to oxygen in the air, which is resulting in breathing problem. In
today
’s era, each family
owns
two to three vehicles. The count of transportation on the road is high, leading to pollution. In every empty land, a person
is desired
to construct which can give them benefits. They are not thinking about the nature.

In order to overcome these problems, every individual should contribute
equally
in the environment growth. Each of one should
start
growing more and more
trees
wherever possible. We can maintain both urban development and environment protection hand in hand.
For instance
, Singapore
is maintained
by planting
trees
on the roof of their
build and
they have opted for vertical plantation which can continue to maintain the green life of the city.

In conclusion
, although residence expansion is necessary in cities,
governments
should attach a great importance to developing green spaces.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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