Receiving bachelor degree is crusial to get a well-paid job in our era But some people consider that professors and teachers at universities cannot teach students how to become successful in community I totally agree with this statement due to some reasons
Formula of building prosperous career and private life cannot be taugh at universities, I opine Because students only learn their major subject ad read books so as to pass exams but they do not get life experience during studying Moreover, universities limit people's imagination and motivation as teachers provoke their own ideas as well as opinions which may result in youths mindset For example, Steve Jobs who was the founder of company "Apple" and one of the richest people in 2000s He droped out from the collage because he was not interested in subjects he learned despite this he continued to follow his goals
In addition to this, universities require much time as a result students cannot focus on their hobbies also they do not have opportunity for fulfillment I deem this is the main factor why studying at university cannot be efficient Acoording to research led by Robert Depp the professor of harvard university a large number of successful people finished high school and even do not apply to collage explaning it by the fact that time is left less while spending time on studying But it was not hindrance for them to get what they want
To conclude, I believe universities cannot lead a milestone to successful career as theit mission is to teach subjects through books
Receiving bachelor degree is
crusial
to
get
a well-paid job in our era
But
some
people
consider that professors and teachers at
universities
cannot teach students how to become successful in community I
totally
agree
with this statement due to
some
reasons
Formula of building prosperous career and private life cannot be
taugh
at
universities
, I opine
Because
students
only
learn their major subject ad read books
so as to
pass exams
but
they do not
get
life experience during studying
Moreover
,
universities
limit
people
's imagination and motivation as teachers provoke their
own
ideas
as well
as opinions which may result in youths mindset
For example
, Steve Jobs who was the founder of
company
"
Apple
"
and one of the richest
people
in 2000s
He
droped
out from the collage
because
he was not interested in subjects he learned despite this he continued to follow his goals
In addition
to this,
universities
require much time
as a result
students cannot focus on their hobbies
also
they do not have opportunity for fulfillment I deem this is the main factor why studying at
university
cannot be efficient
Acoording
to research led by Robert Depp the professor of harvard
university
a large number of
successful
people
finished high school and even do not apply to collage
explaning
it by the fact that time is
left
less while spending time on studying
But
it was not hindrance for them to
get
what they want
To conclude
, I believe
universities
cannot lead a milestone to successful career as
theit
mission is to teach subjects through books
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