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Some people think that public libraries are necessary, while others argue that it is not necessary. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. (Words: 21) v.1

Some people think that public libraries are necessary, while others argue that it is not necessary. (Words: 21) v. 1
Public libraries are the houses of various precious books, a bundle of intelligence and a variety of knowledge which are open for all the common people at free of cost. Most of the people think that public libraries have lost their importance and value in this era, despite this some people consider that public libraries are still the vital source of knowledge. There are many reasons for the decreasing popularity of public libraries. Firstly, most of the libraries are situated in the main centre of the cities which are quite difficult for people to access them due to their busy schedules and traffic congestion whereas on the internet we can find our desired book in a second. Secondly, in a library, we need a lot of time for searching advice in reading numerous books, whereas on the internet, we can easily avail any material just in a click. On the other hand, Public libraries still serve some valuable purposes. To gain intelligence online is a trend of new era, whereas the libraries have an impressive collection of old books and manuscripts that are not available on the net. Also, most of the online knowledge is in English language, whereas libraries have a huge collection of books written in a wide variety of languages. What’s more, libraries have only authentic and reliable books by the contrast knowledgeknowledge available online can’t be authentic. Moreover, the library provides a peaceful and noise free environment for studying. In conclusion, in this globalize world modern technology is rapidly decreasing the importance of public libraries nut still libraries are beneficial for citizens to acquire a large amount of knowledge as well as connect with others. (Words: 285)
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libraries are the
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houses
of various precious
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books
, a bundle of intelligence and a variety of knowledge which are open for all the common
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people
at free of cost.

Most of the
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people
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think
that
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public
libraries have lost their importance and value in this era, despite this
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some
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people
consider that
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public
libraries are
still
the vital source of knowledge.

There are
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many
reasons for the decreasing popularity of
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public
libraries.
Firstly
, most of the libraries
are situated
in the main
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centre
of the cities which are quite difficult for
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people
to access them due to their busy schedules and traffic congestion whereas on the internet we can find our desired
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book
in a second.
Secondly
, in a library, we need
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a lot of
time for searching advice in reading numerous
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books
, whereas on the internet, we can
easily
avail any material
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just
in a click.

On the other hand
,
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Public
libraries
still
serve
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some
valuable purposes. To gain intelligence online is a trend of new era, whereas the libraries have an impressive collection of
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old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
and manuscripts that are not available on the net.
Also
, most of the online knowledge is in English language, whereas libraries have a huge collection of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
written in a wide variety of languages. What’s more, libraries have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
authentic and reliable
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books
by the contrast
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knowledgeknowledge
available online can’t be authentic.
Moreover
, the library provides a peaceful and noise free environment for studying.

In conclusion
, in this globalize world modern technology is
rapidly
decreasing the importance of
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public
libraries
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nut
still
libraries are beneficial for citizens to acquire a large amount of knowledge
as well
as connect with others.

(Words: 285)
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that public libraries are necessary, while others argue that it is not necessary. (Words: 21) v. 1

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
280 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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