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Some people think that plastic shopping bags should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Some people think that plastic shopping bags should be banned. v. 1
In these days, governments try to apply some policies like limiting some things which are harmful to environment and plastic shopping bags are one of them as well. There is a debate among people over whether this policy is right or wrong for society use. However, I strongly support this action for several reasons. However, I confess people who do not agree with the banning say that the plastic shopping bags are more convenient and useable, but I strongly believe that they are so dangerous for environment. Because the plastic containers are not biodegradable and recyclable. So these factors make them difficult to reuse and decay in a landfill. They can stay even more than hundreds of years in the environment. Therefore, the environmentally friendly policies, such as banning the plastic bags should be applied in order to save our planet clean. Moreover, the eco-friendly policies like this one reduce the cost of goods and it is quite beneficial for the government economy. Although people who support the idea of banning plastic bags are not right say that this kind of bags has reuse advantage, it is known that the government has to spend more and more expenses in order to make these plastic containers. So if they will have banned, it can help not only to the environment, but also government budget. To sum up, although some people disagree with the limitations on plastic shopping bags because of their easy use, I strongly believe that this kind of containers harm the environment and they are costly for the government.
In these days,
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governments
try to apply
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some
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policies
like limiting
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some
things which are harmful to
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environment
and
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plastic
shopping
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bags
are one of them
as well
. There is a debate among
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people
over whether this
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policy
is right or
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wrong
for society
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use
.
However
, I
strongly
support this action for several reasons.

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, I confess
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people
who do not
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agree
with the banning say that the
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plastic
shopping
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bags
are more convenient and useable,
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but
I
strongly
believe that they are
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so
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dangerous
for
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environment
.
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Because
the
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plastic
containers are not biodegradable and recyclable.
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So
these factors
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make
them difficult to reuse and decay in a landfill. They can stay even more than hundreds of years in the
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environment
.
Therefore
, the
environmentally
friendly
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policies
, such as banning the
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plastic
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bags
should
be applied
in order to save our planet clean.

Moreover
, the eco-friendly
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policies
like this one
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reduce
the cost of
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goods
and it is quite beneficial for the
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government
economy. Although
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people
who support the
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idea
of banning
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plastic
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bags
are not right say that this kind of
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bags
has reuse advantage, it
is known
that the
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government
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has to
spend more and more expenses in order to
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make
these
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plastic
containers.
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if they will have banned, it can
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help
not
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only
to the
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environment
,
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but
also
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government
budget.

To sum up, although
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some
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people
disagree with the limitations on
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plastic
shopping
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bags
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because
of their easy
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use
, I
strongly
believe that this kind of containers harm the
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environment and
they are costly for the
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government
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that plastic shopping bags should be banned. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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