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In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in the water, so people think they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.2

In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in the water, so people think they should be banned. v. 2
It is believed that plastic shopping bags should not be used for the reason of environmental pollution, both in water and land and the most important rate of rubbish are full of them. This essay suggests two fundamental opinions which are protected the environment and other ones is thinking about human's comfort. Clearly, the environmental pollution is a major issue for our century. There are many pollutants, but mostly plastic bags cause it. To known, plastic is detrimental to land also water. Many people choose to use them in order to shop. Moreover, their harmful effect does not decrease. On the other hand, the people who are conscious of environmental protection how important, suggest plastic bag ban. For example, In Turkey, all plastic shopping bags were banned and this rule is accepted as a law. I strongly believe that, they are absolutely banned all around the world. On the other hand, others think the banning of plastic bags restricts their comfortable shopping. These plastic bags are usual and available in everywhere, but the time when its consumes cancel that will not possible. That belief is not environmental and only individual. All humans are respectful to the environment and it needs protection by everyone. Biological disposable bags might be replaced plastic bags. It is a clear example Gazi University give the students free samples of disposable biological bags. That might be created a good habit to inhibit pollution. To conclude, many pollutants are dangerous both in land and water. So, this problem should be solved to quit plastic bags using habits. I completely agree as a person worried about the environment. In the future, The Earth would be more clear without using pollutants.
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is believed
that
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plastic
shopping
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bags
should not be
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used
for the reason of
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environmental
pollution, both in water and land and the most
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important
rate of rubbish are full of them. This essay suggests two fundamental opinions which
are protected
the environment and
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other
ones is thinking about human's comfort.

Clearly
, the
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environmental
pollution is a major issue for our century. There are
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many
pollutants,
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but
mostly
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plastic
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bags
cause it. To known,
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plastic
is detrimental to land
also
water.
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people
choose to
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use
them in order to shop.
Moreover
, their harmful effect does not decrease. On the
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other
hand, the
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people
who are conscious of
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environmental
protection how
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important
, suggest
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plastic
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ban.
For example
, In Turkey, all
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plastic
shopping
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bags
were banned
and this
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rule
is
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accepted
as a law. I
strongly
believe that, they are
absolutely
banned all around the world.

On the
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other
hand, others
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think
the banning of
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plastic
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bags
restricts their comfortable shopping. These
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plastic
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bags
are usual and available in everywhere,
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but
the time when its consumes cancel that will not possible. That belief is not
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environmental
and
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only
individual. All humans are respectful to the environment and it needs protection by everyone. Biological disposable
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bags
might
be replaced
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plastic
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bags
. It is a
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clear
example
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Gazi
University give the students free samples of disposable biological
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bags
. That might
be created
a
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good
habit to inhibit pollution.

To conclude
,
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many
pollutants are
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dangerous
both in land and water.
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So
, this problem should
be solved
to quit
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plastic
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bags
using habits. I completely
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agree
as a person worried about the environment. In the future, The Earth would be more
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clear
without using pollutants.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in the water, so people think they should be banned. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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