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Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. to what extent do you agree or disagree? v.3

Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. v. 3
Trees play a vital role in having life on the planet blue. Many individuals believe that rather than spending on real estate building structure in urban areas, it is better to do more for plantation drives. I fully support the notion. It is irrefutable to say that with the growing population of the earth, the need of having more land for housing is also surging. This has been resulted in cutting down the jungle area to match with the demands of the citizens. So, in return the global warming has been increased and also health issue of common man has seen a rise from a last few decades. Thus, to have a better quality of air index we should all focus on having more trees. Generally, the trees or forests are a natural home for other species. Hence, to build a home by destroying others home is not a sane thing to do. To add on, the doomsday has arrived when the governments of all nations ought to get unite and take some strong and quick actions toward saving the environment, else there will a natural disaster coming on the way. The green area and parks should be built and it significances should be promoted to not get destroyed by the local people. To recapitulate, the building houses can solve the problem of people moving towards cities or towns. However, in the long run the effect will be catastrophic. The trees are a free source of gases, mainly oxygen, that is required for living beings to survive. Moreover, these are the only spaces for many birds.
Trees play a vital role in having life on the planet blue.
Many
individuals believe that
rather
than spending on real estate building structure in urban areas, it is better to do more for plantation drives. I
fully
support the notion.

It is irrefutable to say that with the growing population of the earth, the need of having more land for housing is
also
surging. This has
been resulted
in cutting down the jungle area to match with the demands of the citizens.
So
, in return the global warming has
been increased
and
also
health issue of common
man
has
seen
a rise from a last few decades.
Thus
, to have a better quality of air index we should all focus on having more trees.

Generally
, the trees or forests are a natural home for other species.
Hence
, to build a home by destroying others home is not a sane thing to do. To
add
on, the doomsday has arrived when the
governments
of all nations ought to
get
unite and take
some
strong and quick actions toward saving the environment, else there will a natural disaster coming on the way. The green area and parks should
be built
and
it
significances
should
be promoted
to not
get
destroyed
by the local
people
.

To recapitulate, the building
houses
can solve the problem of
people
moving towards cities or towns.
However
, in the long run the effect will be catastrophic. The trees are a free source of gases,
mainly
oxygen, that
is required
for living beings to survive.
Moreover
, these are the
only
spaces for
many
birds.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
6.5
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