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Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. v. 1
It is argued by some that constructing houses is not as essential as planting trees in vacant areas in cities and towns. This essay completely agrees with this viewpoint as trees reduce pollution and provide a peaceful environment to relax. Trees can reduce air and noise pollution. As trees take carbon dioxide and release oxygen in the air, it improves the quality of air. Due to an increase in the number of vehicles in cities, noise pollution has also increased significantly. By acting as a buffer, trees can help in decreasing noise pollution. For example, according to the Ahmedabad Municipal Association, a 50% improvement in the air quality was noted along with a significant reduction in noise pollution after planting 1 million trees in open land in Ahmedabad. Trees also provide a peaceful environment in a stress filled world. The environment surrounding these parks and the fresh air improves the mental wellness of men and women and it encourages them to live a stress-free life. These parks can be developed, and various community events related to wellness like meditation camps, yoga centers, and others can be conducted. For example, according to a survey conducted by Oxford University, people who resided near green parks were more likely to not develop stress than people who do not. In conclusion, by planting trees in open regions in urban areas can reduce pollution and provide an environment to gain peace. It is recommended that governments should plant more trees in empty places in cities.
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is argued
by
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some
that constructing
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houses
is not as essential as planting
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trees
in vacant areas in cities and towns. This essay completely
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agrees
with this viewpoint as
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trees
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reduce
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pollution
and provide a peaceful
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environment
to relax.

Trees can
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reduce
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air
and
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noise
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pollution
. As
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trees
take carbon dioxide and release oxygen in the
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air
, it
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improves
the quality of
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air
. Due to an increase in the number of vehicles in cities,
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noise
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pollution
has
also
increased
significantly
. By acting as a buffer,
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trees
can
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help
in decreasing
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noise
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pollution
.
For example
, according to the Ahmedabad Municipal Association, a 50% improvement in the
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air
quality
was noted
along with a significant reduction in
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noise
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pollution
after planting 1 million
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trees
in open land in Ahmedabad.

Trees
also
provide a peaceful
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environment
in a
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stress
filled world. The
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environment
surrounding these parks and the fresh
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air
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improves
the mental wellness of
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men
and women and it encourages them to
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live
a
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stress
-free life. These parks can
be developed
, and various community
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events
related to wellness like meditation camps, yoga centers,
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and others
can
be conducted
.
For example
, according to a survey conducted by Oxford University,
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people
who resided near green parks were more likely to not develop
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stress
than
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people
who do not.

In conclusion
, by planting
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trees
in open regions in urban areas can
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reduce
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pollution
and provide an
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environment
to gain peace. It
is recommended
that
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governments
should plant more
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trees
in empty places in cities.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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