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Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. v. 1
The environment is facing many hazards continuously and the imprudent human action is the first and foremost reason for this. Humans are getting resources from the environment and our life on earth primarily depends on nature. If this continues, there will be an imbalance in the future world. To protect the environment, some people suggest increasing the fuel price as they think that fuel price would reduce the private car ownership and would give a check in the uncontrolled industrialisation. As per the statement, fuel is a part of the hazardous human activities which is harming the environment. By increasing the price of the fuel, the authority might reduce the cars running on the street but that will also be a burden to the fuel users. But they will find an alternative way to overcome the price rise. Moreover, the increasing price of the fuel would also increase the price of necessary products. Poor, thus, would find it even harder to maintain their daily expenses. Therefore, this method will not be a solution to stop continuously increasing environmental hazards. Chemical wastages and solid wastages are also hazardous to the environment. These harms will not stop by increasing fuel prices. Improper removal of electronic wastes is also a danger to the environment. Usage of Chloro Floro Carbon (CFC) in electrical equipment such as the refrigerator, is unavoidable and the use of such household electronics is increasing day by day. This will not be controlled by increasing the price of the fuel. This system might be useful to a certain extent in some developing countries. Due to economic reasons, many people in such countries would not use their private cars. But this might not be useful for developed countries since they could overcome from this situation easily. Also, in fuel rich countries, such as Middle East countries, this will be useless and their profit margin from fuel sales would increase. Therefore, increasing the fuel price is one method of controlling hazards occur through fuel gasification. But, we need to include many integrated systems to stop environmental damages, especially for the benefit of our future generations.
The
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environment
is facing
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many
hazards
continuously
and the imprudent human action is the
first
and foremost reason for this. Humans are getting resources from the
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environment
and our life on earth
primarily
depends on nature. If this continues, there will be an imbalance in the future world. To protect the
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environment
,
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some
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people
suggest
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increasing
the
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fuel
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price
as they
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think
that
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fuel
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price
would
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reduce
the private car ownership and would give a
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check
in the uncontrolled
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industrialisation
.

As per the statement,
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fuel
is a part of the hazardous human activities which is harming the
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environment
. By
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increasing
the
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price
of the
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fuel
, the authority might
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reduce
the cars running on the street
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but
that will
also
be a burden to the
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fuel
users.
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But
they will find an alternative way to overcome the
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price
rise.
Moreover
, the
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increasing
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price
of the
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fuel
would
also
increase the
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price
of necessary products. Poor,
thus
, would find it even harder to maintain their daily expenses.
Therefore
, this method will not be a solution to
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stop
continuously
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increasing
environmental hazards.

Chemical
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wastages
and solid
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wastages
are
also
hazardous to the
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environment
. These harms will not
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stop
by
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increasing
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fuel
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prices
. Improper removal of electronic wastes is
also
a
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danger
to the
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environment
. Usage of
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Chloro
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Floro
Carbon (CFC) in electrical equipment such as the refrigerator, is unavoidable and the
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use
of such household electronics is
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increasing
day by day. This will not
be controlled
by
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increasing
the
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price
of the fuel.

This system might be useful to a certain extent in
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some
developing
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countries
. Due to economic reasons,
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many
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people
in such
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countries
would not
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use
their private cars.
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But
this might not be useful for developed
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countries
since they could overcome from this situation
easily
.
Also
, in
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fuel
rich
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countries
, such as Middle East
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countries
, this will be useless and their profit margin from
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fuel
sales would increase.

Therefore
,
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increasing
the
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fuel
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price
is one method of controlling hazards occur through
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fuel
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gasification
.
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But
, we need to include
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many
integrated systems to
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stop
environmental damages,
especially
for the benefit of our future generations.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
39Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
353 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
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    Present relevant ideas
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