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Some people think that newspapers are the best source of news. Others, however, believe that news is presented better on television or the Internet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.2

Some people think that newspapers are the best source of news. Others, however, believe that news is presented better on television or the Internet. v. 2
knowledge is divine. The people try to improve their knowledge by many modes like newspaper, Television, and online websites. Certain demographics of society argue that newspapers, magazines are the best way to know news while others argue that media is an efficient way to know the news. Let us discuss both views and I believe that media is the best way to catching the latest news, trends and live updates. In the olden days, people use the newspaper as the primary mode to know the news and that to news about the previous day. By reading the newspaper we can cover all the news related to politics, cinema, sports, and business. Here the mode of communication is too slow and there are no live updates. we need to wait at least 24 hours to get the latest updates. The major drawback is only an educated person can read the newspaper. On the other hand, the media plays a crucial role in spreading news within seconds. They also telecast live where people can experience the emotions and reality of the situation. people can access the news in the form of watching news through channels, reading online. other channels like youtube, google, WhatsApp make the spread of news rapidly that helped media to grow enormously within a short time. For example, recently media shared the live telecast of rocket launching by seeing that people can feel pleasure and able to increase the knowledge smartly. To recapitulate, in opine although the argument that, newspaper is the best way to learn news seems plausible, under scrutiny it is quite clear that the premises are false. In light of the above arguments, it is apparent that media is an effective way to know the latest news and technologies.
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knowledge
is divine. The
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people
try to
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improve
their knowledge by
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many
modes like
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newspaper
, Television, and online websites. Certain demographics of society argue that
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newspapers
, magazines are the best way to
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know
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news
while others argue that
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media
is an efficient way to
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know
the
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news
.
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Let
us discuss both views and I believe that
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media
is the best way to catching the latest
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news
, trends and
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live
updates.

In the olden days,
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people
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use
the
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newspaper
as the primary mode to
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know
the
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news
and that to
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news
about the previous day. By reading the
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newspaper
we can cover all the
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news
related to politics, cinema, sports, and business. Here the mode of communication is too slow and there are no
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live
updates.
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we
need to wait at least 24 hours to
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get
the latest updates. The major drawback is
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only
an educated person can read the newspaper.

On the other hand
, the
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media
plays a crucial role in spreading
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news
within seconds. They
also
telecast
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live
where
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people
can experience the emotions and reality of the situation.
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people
can access the
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news
in the form of watching
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news
through channels, reading online.
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other
channels like
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youtube
, google, WhatsApp
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make
the spread of
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news
rapidly
that
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helped
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media
to grow
enormously
within a short time.
For example
, recently
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media
shared the
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live
telecast of rocket launching by seeing that
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people
can feel pleasure and able to increase the knowledge
smartly
.

To recapitulate, in opine although the argument that,
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newspaper
is the best way to learn
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
seems plausible, under scrutiny it is quite
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clear
that the premises are false. In light of the above arguments, it is apparent that
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media
is an effective way to
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know
the latest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
and technologies.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that newspapers are the best source of news. Others, however, believe that news is presented better on television or the Internet. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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