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Some companies have uniforms for their staffs which must be worn all the times. What are advantages for a company of having a uniform? Are there benefits of having uniform for the staff. v.2

Some companies have uniforms for their staffs which must be worn all the times. What are advantages for a company of having a uniform? Are there benefits of having uniform for the staff. v. 2
Now a days companies implemented policies saying that employees should wear uniform all times. Let us discuss the advantages and benefits of wearing uniform. Firstly, each and every company has their own rules and regulations. As per the policies, every employee in the organization should follow their standards. among them uniform for the employee made compulsory in most of the organizations to unite the people and show the equity among the employees. Many companies are investing huge amount for advertising their brands. they also started advertising their brands by printing logos on staff uniforms. For example, employees of zomato started wearing a red dress with a label zomato on their dress. By this one can easy recognize the person’s identity and also brand of zomato increases without any publicity. More over security of the organization may increase if we follow certain dress code. security department easily can recognize the employees and able to give required privileges to them based on their grade. Some non-profitable organizations of countries treat uniform as their pride, everyone in the country respect that honor. Government design uniform for the employees in the organizations of military, army and police based on their grade and posting. army uniforms will be designed with a special material that helps them to protect them from cold and enemies. For example, people working in regions like Kashmir needs special uniforms as they are working in cold places. To recapitulate, employees wearing uniforms helps to increase the unity among organization and also provides benefits to the individuals.
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companies
implemented policies saying that
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employees
should wear
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uniform
all times.
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us discuss the advantages and benefits of wearing uniform.

Firstly
, each and every
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company
has their
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own
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rules
and regulations. As per the policies, every
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employee
in the
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organization
should follow their standards.
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among
them
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uniform
for the
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employee
made compulsory in most of the
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organizations
to unite the
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people
and
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show
the equity among the
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employees
.
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companies
are investing huge amount for advertising their brands.
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they
also
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started
advertising their brands by printing logos on staff
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uniforms
.
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,
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employees
of
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zomato
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started
wearing a red dress with a label
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zomato
on their dress. By this one can easy recognize the person’s identity and
also
brand of
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zomato
increases without any publicity.

More over security of the
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organization
may increase if we follow certain dress code.
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security
department
easily
can recognize the
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employees
and able to give required privileges to them based on their grade.

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Some
non-profitable
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organizations
of countries treat
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uniform
as their pride, everyone in the country respect that honor.
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Government
design
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uniform
for the
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employees
in the
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organizations
of military, army and police based on their grade and posting.
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army
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uniforms
will
be designed
with a special material that
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helps
them to protect them from
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cold
and enemies.
For example
,
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people
working in regions like Kashmir needs special
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uniforms
as they are working in
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cold
places.

To recapitulate,
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employees
wearing
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uniforms
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helps
to increase the unity among
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organization
and
also
provides benefits to the individuals.
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IELTS essay Some companies have uniforms for their staffs which must be worn all the times. What are advantages for a company of having a uniform? Are there benefits of having uniform for the staff. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
255 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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