Some people think that news has no connection with people’s lives; so it is a waste of time to read newspapers and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1
Some people think that news has no connection with people’s lives; so it is a waste of time to read newspapers and watch television news programs. v. 1
It is believed that there is no connection between people’s life and news, so it is time-consuming to read newspaper and watch the television to get more information. In my point of view, I partly agree with this statement because getting the knowledge from the news also has its own benefits.
On the one hand, people nowadays are really busy with their work, so there is no leisure time for them to read and watch the news, which is tabloid or fake news, so it will be a waste of time. Moreover, news on TV also likes that, it always repeats the news for a long time, so it would make the viewers feel boring when watching them. So instead of watching those tabloid news they can do many things that helpful to their work. For example, the young people nowadays tend to read news about their idol which does not have any benefits for their studying quality, so if they spend that time on studying, they would have a better life in the future.
On the other hand, reading news also brings the benefits for us, if we know how to choose the good news to read. To begin with, the students should read the news relate to the cultural information or scientific knowledge, so it will expand the horizon and they will have a good mark in that field. Moreover, cultural news provides readers the traditional culture of all countries from all over the world, which is a really good tool to ready for the globalization. For example, Discovery channel, which provides the viewers the information about the creature in the natural life, and it will not waste the time on this program.
To sum up, although some news is wasting people’s time to follow, it will be a good tendency if the reader can choose the right news to read.
It
is believed
that there is no
connection between
people’s
life and
news
,
so
it is time-consuming to
read
newspaper and
watch
the television to
get
more information. In my point of view, I partly
agree
with this statement
because
getting the knowledge from the
news
also
has its
own
benefits.
On the one hand,
people
nowadays are
really
busy with their work,
so
there is no leisure
time
for them to
read
and
watch
the
news
, which is tabloid or fake
news
,
so
it will be a waste of
time
.
Moreover
,
news
on TV
also
likes that, it always repeats the
news
for a long
time
,
so
it would
make
the viewers feel boring when watching them.
So
instead
of watching those tabloid
news
they can do
many
things that helpful to their work.
For example
, the young
people
nowadays tend to
read
news
about their idol which does not have any benefits for their studying quality,
so
if they spend that
time
on studying, they would have a better life in the future.
On the other hand
, reading
news
also
brings the benefits for us, if we know how to choose the
good
news
to
read
. To
begin
with, the students should
read
the
news
relate to the cultural information or scientific knowledge,
so
it will expand the
horizon and
they will have a
good
mark in that field.
Moreover
, cultural
news
provides readers the traditional culture of all countries from all over the world, which is a
really
good
tool to ready for the globalization.
For example
, Discovery channel, which provides the viewers the information about the creature in the natural life, and it will not waste the
time
on this program.
To sum up, although
some
news
is wasting
people’s
time
to follow, it will be a
good
tendency if the reader can choose the right
news
to
read
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes