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Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own styles. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.6

Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own styles. v. 6
There are more and more houses which are specially designed for this modern society because of its developed functions. Some people believe that new houses should be constructed in the same style as other traditional ones in a locality, others argue that they should have the right to build their houses based on their favourite. I do agree with the former idea because of several reasons. On the one hand, some people think that society should welcome change and allow citizens to build houses in modern styles. It is essential to respect their own decision since we can do things we would love to within the laws. Therefore, as citizens, they are free to design and construct their fashionable houses, which are evidence of their sophistication. Additionally, modern houses are far more affordable than the traditional counterparts. Building materials like stones and wood are quite difficult and expensive to buy. In fact, not only building materials, but also maintenance costs are significantly higher. Consequently, to construct a modern style house is much easier and cheaper than the other. On the other hand, there are strong arguments that new houses should adopt the architectural style of the local area. In terms of the tangible cultural heritage of a small town or a village, houses with traditional styles and characteristics appear as a strong sense of identity. Only traditional houses have a link to our roots since they represent our lifestyles, economic situation and also solidarity. From an architectural perspective, the mixing of modern and traditional buildings is an eyesore. The former is failing to blend in with the latter due to the lack of unity among each other and the beauty of the village also be affected severely. For example, Hoi An Ancient town in Vietnam is one of the traditional towns and it still kept the old structure of houses since a hundred year ago. Consequently, Hoi A is a great destination for tourism and architectural or historical studies. From all the above-mentioned, although it is costly, citizens should respect the traditional aspect of a community in constructing houses. Tradition is an important factor in our lives, especially the next generation; therefore, it is worth preserving.
There are more and more
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houses
which are
specially
designed for this
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modern
society
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because
of its developed functions.
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people
believe that new
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houses
should
be constructed
in the same
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style
as
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other
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traditional
ones in a locality, others argue that they should have the right to build their
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houses
based on their
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favourite
. I do
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agree
with the former
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idea
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because
of several reasons.

On the one hand,
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some
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people
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think
that society should welcome
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change
and
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allow
citizens to build
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houses
in
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modern
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styles
. It is essential to respect their
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own
decision since we can do things we would
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love
to within the laws.
Therefore
, as citizens, they are free to design and construct their fashionable
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houses
, which are evidence of their sophistication.
Additionally
,
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modern
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houses
are far more affordable than the
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traditional
counterparts. Building materials like stones and wood are quite difficult and expensive to
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buy
. In fact, not
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only
building materials,
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but
also
maintenance costs are
significantly
higher.
Consequently
, to construct a
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modern
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style
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house
is much easier and cheaper than the other.

On the
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other
hand, there are strong arguments that new
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houses
should adopt the architectural
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style
of the local area. In terms of the tangible cultural heritage of a
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small
town or a village,
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houses
with
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traditional
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styles
and characteristics appear as a strong sense of identity.
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Only
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traditional
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houses
have a link to our roots since they represent our lifestyles, economic situation and
also
solidarity. From an architectural perspective, the mixing of
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modern
and
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traditional
buildings is an eyesore. The former is failing to blend in with the latter due to the lack of unity among each
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other
and the beauty of the village
also
be
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affected
severely
.
For example
,
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Hoi
An Ancient town in Vietnam is one of the
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traditional
towns and it
still
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kept
the
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old
structure of
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houses
since a
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hundred year
ago.
Consequently
,
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Hoi
A is a great destination for tourism and architectural or historical studies.

From all the above-mentioned, although it is costly, citizens should respect the
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traditional
aspect of a community in constructing
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houses
. Tradition is an
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important
factor in our
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lives
,
especially
the
next
generation;
therefore
, it is worth preserving.
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IELTS essay Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own styles. v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
366 words
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