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Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the style s of their own choice Discuss both view and give your own v.2

Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the style s of their own choice 2
There are differing views with regard to the question of which housing style is the best. While some argue that residents should imitate the presence patterns, others, including me, believe that people should be permitted to make their own decisions in construction. Some people are of the opinion that traditional styles in residential areas need to be continued in building industry. They assert that harmony creation in the appearance of a city is one of the most basic pillars in architecture, resulting in principal urbanization. It means that all buildings in a specific area are required to be similar, not only in terms of used material such as brick, glass or concrete, but also their size. Proponents of this idea argue that if, for example, a new high- rise building was created between numbers of low-rise ones, the result would definitely be in contrast with aesthetic rules. In addition, in this case, neighbor houses perhaps lose their light and airy spaces due to the shadow created by new multi-stage building. In spite of these arguments, I believe that citizens should have this right to pursue their passions in house building. In fact, according to the citizenship rights, all residents investing individually are free to have their own choice related to their properties. For instance, it may be that some inhabitants tend to build an energy-efficient house to help protect the environment. Therefore, they have to select ultra-modern designs such as using double-gazed windows or insulated walls just to name a few, which may not to be matched with older styles. So, it is reasonable that residents are given enough opportunities to build their desirable house. In conclusion, although similar styles in building industry leads to an attractive appearance, in my view, respecting citizen' s taste is much more important than the beauty.
There are differing views with regard to the question of which housing
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style
is the best. While
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some
argue that residents should imitate the presence patterns, others, including me, believe that
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people
should
be permitted
to
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make
their
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own
decisions in construction.

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Some
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people
are of the opinion that traditional
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styles
in residential areas need to
be continued
in
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building
industry. They assert that harmony creation in the appearance of a city is one of the most basic pillars in architecture, resulting in principal urbanization. It means that all
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buildings
in a specific area
are required
to be similar, not
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only
in terms of
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used
material such as brick, glass or concrete,
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but
also
their size. Proponents of this
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idea
argue that if,
for example
, a new high- rise
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building
was created
between numbers of low-rise ones, the result would definitely be
in contrast
with aesthetic
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rules
.
In addition
,
in this case
, neighbor
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houses
perhaps lose their light and airy spaces due to the shadow created by new multi-stage building.

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In spite of
these arguments, I believe that citizens should have this right to pursue their passions in
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house
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building
.
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In
fact, according to the citizenship rights, all residents investing
individually
are free to have their
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own
choice related to their properties.
For instance
, it may be that
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some
inhabitants tend to build an energy-efficient
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house
to
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help
protect the environment.
Therefore
, they
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have to
select ultra-modern designs such as using double-gazed windows or insulated walls
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just
to name a few, which may not to
be matched
with older
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styles
.
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So
, it is reasonable that residents are
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given
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enough
opportunities to build their desirable
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house
.

In conclusion
, although similar
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styles
in
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building
industry leads to an attractive appearance, in my view, respecting
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#039; s taste is much more
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important
than the beauty.
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9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the style s of their own choice 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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