According to some people vital aim of schools is turning pupils into good citizens or workers apparently from getting their individual benefits. Personally, I agree to this term and reason why I am going to describe it now.
To begin with, schools are places where the most of our children's life was spent, so there would be created basics of pupils and it depicts their future. First of all, the way of teachings in the numerous schools is held in the group which means at least 20 pupils in the class, so teachers don't have enough time, to spend it by listening all of the opinions gave by the children. Furthermore the individual attitude of pupils may be rejected in case that their method would be different from their teacher's and leading them to be in a box, and only follow what tutors tell them. For instance, if you do something by yourself and if it various than that of teachers, you have to get a less mark. To put in other words, they will begin to do everything they were told, like robots.
To put it in other words, the amount of people think that doing things like they tend to do is well and want them to go on like this. After some time they will adopt in such circumstances and carry on with this.
In conclusion, schools are a place from where the various owners of jobs can grow up. So the schools can make persons as robots or creators.
According to
some
people
vital aim of
schools
is turning
pupils
into
good
citizens or workers
apparently
from getting their individual benefits.
Personally
, I
agree
to this term and reason why I am going to
describe
it
now
.
To
begin
with,
schools
are places where the most of our children's life
was spent
,
so
there would
be created
basics of
pupils
and it depicts their future.
First of all
, the way of teachings in the numerous
schools
is held
in the group which means at least 20
pupils
in the
class
,
so
teachers don't have
enough
time, to spend it by listening
all of the
opinions gave by the children.
Furthermore
the individual attitude of
pupils
may
be rejected
in case that their method would be
different
from their teacher's and leading them to be in a box, and
only
follow what tutors
tell
them.
For instance
, if you do something by yourself and if
it
various
than that of teachers, you
have to
get
a less mark. To put
in other words
, they will
begin
to do everything they were
told
, like robots.
To put it
in other words
, the amount of
people
think
that doing things like they tend to do is well and want them to go on like this. After
some
time they will adopt in such circumstances and carry on with this.
In conclusion
,
schools
are a place from where the various owners of jobs can grow up.
So
the
schools
can
make
persons as robots or creators.
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