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some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of towns and cities then to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of towns and cities then to build more housing. v. 1
Trees not only provide environmental benefits, but it also provides social and economic benefits. Some people believe that tree plantation in open areas of villages and cities is more vital than constructing houses. This essay will argue that why planting trees is completely beneficial than building more houses. Sowing trees are more effective and useful to us compared to building houses in cities and towns. Trees help purify the polluted air. It takes carbon dioxide and release oxygen in the air. They also provide shade to homes, roads and gardens. While sitting under the tree, we can have cooler air and fresh oxygen. For example, recent research shows that hundred trees can remove tons of carbon dioxide from the air annually and it adds tons of oxygen, which is essential for the earth's environment. There are no reasons that can stop us from planting trees, hence some people think that planting trees is better than building houses in open spaces in cities and villages. On the other hand, we know that demand of new houses is increasing these days with growing population. Because of these, it becomes essential to build more houses. To illustrate, we can have that empty space for trees from construction high rise buildings. We know that the population of Earth is increasing dramatically, hence it becomes inevitable to build more houses, but we can't ignore the need of trees for environment. In conclusion, the essay argued why sowing trees are entirely essential than building new houses in the empty spaces of towns and cities. In my opinion, planting trees is more beneficial than building homes.
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Trees
not
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only
provide environmental benefits,
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but
it
also
provides social and economic benefits.
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Some
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people
believe that
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tree
plantation in open areas of villages and
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cities
is more vital than constructing
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houses
. This essay will argue that why
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planting
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trees
is completely
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beneficial
than
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building
more
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houses
.

Sowing
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trees
are more effective and useful to us compared to
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building
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houses
in
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cities
and towns.
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Trees
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help
purify the polluted
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air
. It takes carbon dioxide and release oxygen in the
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air
. They
also
provide shade to homes, roads and gardens. While sitting under the
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tree
, we can have cooler
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air
and fresh oxygen.
For example
, recent research
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shows
that hundred
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trees
can remove tons of carbon dioxide from the
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air
annually
and it
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adds
tons of oxygen, which is essential for the earth's environment. There are no reasons that can
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stop
us from
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planting
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trees
,
hence
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some
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people
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think
that
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planting
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trees
is better than
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building
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houses
in open spaces in
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cities
and villages.

On the other hand
, we know that demand of new
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houses
is increasing these days with growing population.
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Because
of these, it becomes essential to build more
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houses
. To illustrate, we can have that empty space for
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trees
from construction high rise
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buildings
. We know that the population of Earth is increasing
dramatically
,
hence
it becomes inevitable to build more
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houses
,
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but
we can't
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ignore
the need of
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trees
for environment.

In conclusion
, the essay argued why sowing
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trees
are
entirely
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essential
than
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building
new
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houses
in the empty spaces of towns and
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cities
. In my opinion,
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planting
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trees
is more beneficial than
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building
homes.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
38Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
Language is the road map of a culture. It tells you where its people come from and where they are going.
Rita Mae Brown

IELTS essay some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of towns and cities then to build more housing. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
269 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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