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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online? v.12

An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online? v. 12
With technology advances, customer buying preferences have changed tremendously. Earlier, people used to prefer to visit the markets for shopping, whereas today, most of the public want to buy things online. There are so many portals which are offering lucrative options for the online buyers. Sites like Myntra, Grofers, offer huge discounts on sale. Online shoppers are no more limited to getting clothes and all, but they can very well buy groceries, gardening items, stationary and what not. Everything is available for every age group. Variety of choices are available for anyone to buy. Online shopping is convenient. It provides flexibility for the users to get anything from anywhere. And the items are delivered to their doorsteps. Many sites do not even charge for delivery. Customers are delighted to have fast service with premium options available in some portals like Amazon Prime. Needless to say, even companies prefer to sell online nowadays. Marketeers can study buying history of the customers to design their marketing strategies. Customers are more likely to order immediately in that case. Many entrepreneurs sell online as they do not have to maintain physical shops. They tie up with Myntra or others and sell their products directly to customers earning large profits. There are, however, certain disadvantages to both, the consumers and the retailers. Users sometimes get low quality product, which otherwise looks different online. Also, they cannot physically try or see the products. Companies, on the other hand, often find it hard to build trust with their customers.
With technology advances,
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customer
buying preferences have
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changed
tremendously
. Earlier,
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people
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used
to prefer to visit the markets for shopping, whereas
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today
, most of the public want to
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buy
things online.

There are
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so
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portals which are offering lucrative options for the
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online
buyers. Sites like
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Myntra
,
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Grofers
, offer huge discounts on sale.
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Online
shoppers are no more limited to getting clothes and all,
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but
they can
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very
well
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buy
groceries, gardening items, stationary and what not. Everything is available for every age group. Variety of choices are available for anyone to
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buy
.
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Online
shopping is convenient. It provides flexibility for the users to
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get
anything from anywhere. And the items
are delivered
to their doorsteps.
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Many
sites do not even charge for delivery.
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Customers
are delighted
to have
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fast
service with premium options available in
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some
portals like Amazon Prime.

Needless to say, even
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companies
prefer to sell
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online
nowadays. Marketeers can study buying history of the
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customers
to design their marketing strategies.
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Customers
are more likely to order immediately
in that case
.
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Many
entrepreneurs sell
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online
as they do not
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have to
maintain physical shops. They tie up with
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Myntra
or others and sell their products
directly
to
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customers
earning large profits.

There are,
however
, certain disadvantages to both, the consumers and the retailers. Users
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sometimes
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get
low quality product, which
otherwise
looks
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different
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online
.
Also
, they cannot
physically
try or
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see
the products.
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Companies
,
on the other hand
,
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often
find it
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hard
to build trust with their
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customers
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online? v. 12

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
252 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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