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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.2

Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. v. 2
This is the essay is going to discuss the two sides of studying alone or to exercise with a bunch of people and what is suitable more for a student. However, some students like to prepare for exams alone, so they will be wearing comfortable clothes and they can grab anything that they want from the kitchen to prepare for exams in calm place without any noise. For instance, when I was studying in college, I used to love to study alone and whenever I struggle with something I cam google it or watch a tutorial on YouTube. Not to mention that I can focus without any destruction. But on the other hand, some undergraduate prefers to prepare for exams with groups. That gives to commit to a schedule for studying. When they found anything that challenges them, they can ask each other to explain to them. For example, some of my friends cannot do it alone if they didn't go to study with a bunch of people they will say lets just do it tomorrow until their time is already wasted and can not do anything but to read the slides and hope for the best. In conclusion, I think it really depends on what is the scholar himself like either to study alone or in groups. Also depends on the subject itself sometimes the subject is hard and student want to explain things to each other.
This is the essay is going to discuss the two sides of studying
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alone
or to exercise with a bunch of
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people
and what is suitable more for a student.

However
,
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some
students like to prepare for exams
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alone
,
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so
they will be wearing comfortable
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
clothes and
they can grab anything that they want from the kitchen to prepare for exams in calm place without any noise.
For instance
, when I was studying in college, I
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used
to
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love
to study
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alone
and whenever I struggle with something I
Did you mean "came" (past tense of 'to come')?
cam
google it or
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watch
a tutorial on YouTube. Not to mention that I can focus without any destruction.

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But
on the other hand
,
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some
undergraduate prefers to prepare for exams with groups. That gives to commit to a schedule for studying. When they found anything that challenges them, they can ask each other to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
to them.
For example
,
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some
of my friends cannot do it
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alone
if they didn't go to study with a bunch of
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people
they will say
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lets
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just
do it tomorrow until their time is already wasted and can not do anything
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but
to read the slides and hope for the best.

In conclusion
, I
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think
it
really
depends on what is the scholar himself like either to study
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
alone
or in groups.
Also
depends on the subject itself
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sometimes
the subject is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
and student want to
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explain
things to each other.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
238 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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