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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. v.5

Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. v. 5
Some people believe that having friends with the same opinions as they are better than the ones with different opinions. Firstly, people with the same interests and hobbies are very easy to get along. In this case, people always have something to discuss. If your friend has a similar point of view on a particular problem, the problem can be resolved quickly. Such friends will back you out in any discussion or argument. You will always have someone whom you can rely on. On the other hand, friends with the same opinions and interests are quite boring. You will not find any clash and will agree on every issue. If your friend disagrees with you, you will have many views and can come out with a more detailed solution. For example, disagreement leads to a heated debate or an altercation resulting in ruining of friendship. According to me, I believe friends should not agree with all views and opinions as they. I think this kind of friendship is monotonous and wouldn’t last long. However friends with the same interests or opinions will support you in any discussion and it’s a wonderful thing too. In conclusion, people should have friends with different opinions over the friends with the same views. You should respect, every view of your friend, making sure of not taking it to a heated quarrel which then results in spoiling friendship.
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Language shapes the way we think, and determines what we can think about.
Benjamin Lee Whorf

IELTS essay Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. v. 5

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
233 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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