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Some believe that it is good for a country's culture to import films and TV programmes, while others think that it is better for a country to have their own films and TV programmes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.1

Some believe that it is good for a country's culture to import films and TV programmes, while others think that it is better for a country to have their own films and TV programmes. v. 1
In recent times, the media and its offshoots are playing a vital role in everyone’s life. Because of which, there is a widespread criticism that states the role of advertisements being telecasted in television or shared in any of the social media seems to be demoralising and carry little benefits. While I concede to this belief about the maligning impacts of commercials, I have some reservations in completely banning those. To begin with, we have been acclimated to watching advertisements since more than 3 decades. Interestingly, the role of media has become enormously aggressive such that most of the times it annoys people when they are watching any interesting content on television or in any electronic gadgets. For example, there are multiple brands of shampoos and hair dyes being endorsed by various film fraternities. It is a regrettable fact that being a social icon, the celebrities support such products without assessing the ill nature of the additives present. Furthermore, when people start to use these products, it leads to skin irritation and rashes instead of giving the promised outcomes. Having said that, are advertisements really behove to the benefit of people? If it does so, it would not need any sort of endorsement to be made in the media. For example, there are no such posters made for buying food from any established food outlets such as McDonalds or KFC. Therefore, people should not fall into the trap of buying those advertised products without weighing their health or skin compatibility with those chemicals. However, if any, of the products are supported by the government or any civic societies, then we can buy those products after careful consideration. To recapitulate, advertisements are made only to reap revenues by hoodwinking unbelievable benefits to the layman. It is our imperative responsibility to examine the advertisements before deciding whether to buy the product or not. Therefore, I agree that advertisements are always deceptive to consumers and people should not fall into their traps.
In recent times, the
media
and its offshoots are playing a vital role in everyone’s life.
Because
of which, there is a widespread criticism that states the role of
advertisements
being
telecasted
in television or shared in any of the social
media
seems to be
demoralising
and carry
little
benefits. While I concede to this belief about the maligning impacts of commercials, I have
some
reservations in completely banning those.

To
begin
with, we have
been acclimated
to watching
advertisements
since more than 3 decades.
Interestingly
, the role of
media
has become
enormously
aggressive such that
most of the times
it annoys
people
when they are watching any interesting content on television or in any electronic gadgets.
For example
, there are multiple brands of shampoos and hair dyes
being endorsed
by various film fraternities. It is a regrettable fact that being a social icon, the celebrities support such
products
without assessing the ill nature of the additives present.
Furthermore
, when
people
start
to
use
these
products
, it leads to skin irritation and rashes
instead
of giving the promised outcomes.

Having said that, are
advertisements
really
behove
to the benefit of
people
? If it does
so
, it would not need any sort of endorsement to
be made
in the
media
.
For example
, there are no such posters made for buying food from any established food outlets such as
McDonalds
or KFC.
Therefore
,
people
should not fall into the trap of buying those advertised
products
without weighing their health or skin compatibility with those chemicals.
However
, if any, of the
products
are supported
by the
government
or any civic societies, then we can
buy
those
products
after careful consideration.

To recapitulate,
advertisements
are made
only
to reap revenues by hoodwinking unbelievable benefits to the layman. It is our imperative responsibility to examine the
advertisements
before
deciding whether to
buy
the
product
or not.
Therefore
, I
agree
that
advertisements
are always deceptive to consumers and
people
should not fall into their traps.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some believe that it is good for a country's culture to import films and TV programmes, while others think that it is better for a country to have their own films and TV programmes. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
329 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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