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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.8

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. v. 8
Climate change is a global issue, and there is an increasing concern and interest about it throughout the world. Some individual argued that we need to accommodate it rather than avert the problem from happening. I completely disagree with this viewpoint as it may have unprecedented devastating effect to the Society at large. People who argue that climate change should be accommodated have one main reason for this opinion. They suggest that because climate change is a natural occurrence, it will be too expensive to fix it. What is more, they feel like instead of spending one percent of world gross domestic product on climate change, it should be used to improve human health. Thus, the reason not to control control the change. Nevertheless, there are reasons for arguing against because if climate change is left unchecked, it will cause a destructive problem to the society, such as global warming. This is an increase in earth's temperature as a result of growing carbon dioxide emissions into the atmosphere emanating from human activities. If meaningful measures are being introduced to checkmate these activities, the number of gases being thrown into the atmosphere will be reduced drastically thereby preventing greenhouse effect, which heats up the society. Measures such as planting of trees, that is making the world greener, and use of electric cars have proven effective. Example Amazon, one of the worlds leading companies has planned to buy 100 million cars by the year 2030 as a control actions for climate change. In conclusion, even though some people believe that climate change is a natural phenomenon and should not be controlled, I believe that establishing some stringent measures to avert this global trends will save the world from unknown ruin.
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Climate
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is a global issue, and there is an increasing concern and interest about it throughout the
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world
.
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individual argued that we need to accommodate it
rather
than avert the problem from happening. I completely disagree with this viewpoint as it may have unprecedented devastating effect to the Society at large.

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who argue that
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climate
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change
should
be accommodated
have one main reason for this opinion. They suggest that
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because
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climate
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change
is a natural occurrence, it will be too expensive to
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fix
it.
What is more
, they feel like
instead
of spending one percent of
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world
gross domestic product on
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climate
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change
, it should be
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used
to
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improve
human health.
Thus
, the reason not to
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control control
the
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change
.

Nevertheless
, there are reasons for arguing against
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because
if
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climate
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change
is
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left
unchecked, it will cause a destructive problem to the society, such as global warming. This is an increase in earth's temperature
as a result
of growing carbon dioxide emissions into the atmosphere emanating from human activities. If meaningful measures are
being introduced
to checkmate these activities, the number of gases
being thrown
into the atmosphere will be
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reduced
drastically
thereby preventing greenhouse effect, which heats up the society. Measures such as planting of trees,
that is
making the
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world
greener, and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of electric cars have proven effective. Example Amazon, one of the
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worlds
leading
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companies
has planned to
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buy
100 million cars by the year 2030 as a control actions for
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climate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
.

In conclusion
,
even though
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some
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people
believe that
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climate
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change
is a natural phenomenon and should not
be controlled
, I believe that establishing
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some
stringent measures to avert this global trends will save the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
world
from unknown ruin.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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