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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.5

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. v. 5
Significant climate changes have been observed in many parts of the world. Some people believe that figuring out a way to adapt to the changing climate rather than preventing it from happening is the best solution to this problem. In my opinion, I agree with this statement to some extents. I think people should try to mitigate the negative effects caused by climate change so that they can live with it. Meanwhile, they should also take some measures to prevent it from getting worse. It is undeniable that it is necessary for people to find a way to live with the changing climate because it has already happened. We cannot actually prevent something that has already happened. All people must face the truth that the changing climate has brought us a variety of negative impacts. For example, the temperature is increasing and the sea level is rising. Finding a way to mitigate the demerits of these phenomena is, therefore, critical to human beings. Only in this way, the development of human society will not be inhibited by the effects of climate change. While it is impossible for us to prevent the climate change that has already happened, it does not mean that we can allow the situation to get worse. People still need to find out the reason of climate change and try to come up with a practical solution to prevent it from getting worse. If we only focus on how to adapt the changes but ignore the problem itself, the change of climate will become more significant. The more significant has the climate changed, the more difficult it is for us to deal with it. We have to adopt some measures to prevent it from being unmitigable. Otherwise, the world may suffer from a catastrophic consequence. To conclude, we have to admit the fact that the climate change has already happened therefore we must find a way to adapt these changes. However, a series of prevention measures still need to be figured out to avoid the predictable worse situation in the future.
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changes
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been observed
in
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many
parts of the world.
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Some
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people
believe that figuring out a way to adapt to the changing
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climate
rather
than preventing it from happening is the best solution to this problem. In my opinion, I
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agree
with this statement to
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some
extents. I
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think
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people
should try to mitigate the
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negative
effects caused by
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climate
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change
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so
that they can
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live
with it. Meanwhile, they should
also
take
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some
measures to
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prevent
it from getting worse.

It is undeniable that it is necessary for
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people
to find a way to
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live
with the changing
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climate
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because
it has
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already
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happened
. We cannot actually
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prevent
something that has
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already
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happened
. All
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people
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must
face the truth that the changing
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climate
has brought us a variety of
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negative
impacts.
For example
, the temperature is increasing and the sea level is rising. Finding a way to mitigate the demerits of these phenomena is,
therefore
, critical to human beings.
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Only
in this way, the development of human society will not
be inhibited
by the effects of
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climate
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change
.

While it is impossible for us to
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prevent
the
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climate
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change
that has
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already
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happened
, it does not mean that we can
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allow
the situation to
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get
worse.
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People
still
need to find out the reason of
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climate
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change
and try to
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come
up with a practical solution to
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prevent
it from getting worse. If we
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only
focus on how to adapt the
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changes
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but
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ignore
the problem itself, the
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change
of
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climate
will become more significant. The more significant has the
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climate
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changed
, the more difficult it is for us to deal with it. We
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have to
adopt
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some
measures to
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prevent
it from being
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unmitigable
.
Otherwise
, the world may suffer from a catastrophic consequence.

To conclude
, we
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have to
admit the fact that the
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climate
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change
has
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already
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happened
therefore
we
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must
find a way to adapt these
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changes
.
However
, a series of prevention measures
still
need to
be figured
out to avoid the predictable worse situation in the future.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
37Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
344 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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