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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.26

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. v. 26
It is thought by some people that we ought to live with climate change instead of trying to reverse or prevent it. I completely disagree with this as there is no way to coexist with climate change. It is almost impossible to live in a world that suffers from global warming since multiple evidences exist to show how badly affected the earth is. For example, the weather has severely changed in recent decades and the temperature is always increasing. This change in the weather has contributed to several disasters such as wildfires in various countries in the world, hurricanes, floods, droughts, as well as melting glaciers. Additionally, many species are endangered because their natural habits are threatened by global warming. The reasons why all these environmental issues started are human activities, and thus, we must be responsible for what we did. Numerous steps can be taken by humans to stop climate change and reverse its effects. Scientists and environmentalists have been working hand in hand to find methods that can mitigate climate change. For instance, many projects are being carried worldwide to plant more trees in order to absorb as much carbon dioxide from the atmosphere as possible. Carbon dioxide, which is one of the greatest contributors to global warming, has been released in abundance due to deforestation. Due to that, planting trees is a plausible countermeasure to deforestation. Moreover, other methods to eliminate climate change include reducing pollution, banning plastics, becoming vegan, and using environmentally friendly transportation methods, such as cycling. To conclude, the catastrophic impact that climate change has on earth makes it unimaginable to find a way to live with it instead of preventing it. We are all part of one ecosystem and the decline of one of its parts leads to severe consequences for everyone.
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thought
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some
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people
that we ought to
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live
with
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climate
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change
instead
of trying to reverse or
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prevent
it. I completely disagree with this as there is no way to coexist with
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climate
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change
.

It is almost impossible to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in a world that suffers from global warming since multiple evidences exist to
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show
how
badly
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affected
the earth is.
For example
, the weather has
severely
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changed
in recent decades and the temperature is always increasing. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
in the weather has contributed to several disasters such as wildfires in various countries in the world, hurricanes, floods, droughts,
as well
as melting glaciers.
Additionally
,
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many
species
are endangered
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because
their natural habits
are threatened
by global warming.

The reasons why all these environmental issues
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started
are human activities, and
thus
, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be responsible for what we did. Numerous steps can
be taken
by humans to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
and reverse its effects. Scientists and environmentalists have been working hand in hand to find methods that can mitigate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
.
For instance
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
projects are
being carried
worldwide to plant more trees in order to absorb as much carbon dioxide from the atmosphere as possible. Carbon dioxide, which is one of the greatest contributors to global warming, has
been released
in abundance due to deforestation. Due to that, planting trees is a plausible countermeasure to deforestation.
Moreover
, other methods to eliminate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
include reducing pollution, banning plastics, becoming vegan, and using
environmentally
friendly transportation methods, such as cycling.

To conclude
, the catastrophic impact that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
has on earth
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
it unimaginable to find a way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
with it
instead
of preventing it. We are all part of one ecosystem and the decline of one of its parts leads to severe consequences for everyone.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. v. 26

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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