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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.25

It is increasing common that people should adapt to climate change rather than manage to combat this problem. From my point of view, As this tendency will negatively impinge on the whole society, there should be many sound approach to that both government and individuals can implement to tackle this issue. On the on hand, the consequences of climate fluctuation are disatrous means that the possiblility for people to live in harmony with it is entirely impossible. For example, with an unprecedented rise in sea level, those people who live in low-lying area are obviously succumb to fight this issue, which cause numerous imperative problems including famine, homelessness and even death. Another instance is that the long-lasting drought is the main culprit behind the ecological catastrophe. Not only do people struggle with water deficit but flora and fauna also face up with the destruction of natural habitat. On the other hand, both government and society shouls join hand to conduct many effective campaigns to hinder or at least mitigate this problem. A simple measure would be for the government to impose strict laws to limit the carbon dioxide emissions or other pollutants which lead to global warming. What’s more, They should invest on renewable energy production from solar, wind or geothermal pressure, which in turn, conserve energy and reverse climate change. Individual is also of paramount importance in solving this issue by limiting their adverse impact on the environment as well as climate. In lieu of using private vehicles, they can use public transport like buses or trains which play a key role in cutting down on exhaust fumes discharged from cars In conclusion, Although people have to make great endeavors to prevent climate instability, they should find many efficient sollutions to avoid it, otherwise, natural calamities will take a toll on their life.
It is increasing common that
people
should adapt to
climate
change
rather
than manage to combat this problem. From my point of view, As this tendency will
negatively
impinge
on the whole
society, there should be
many sound approach
to that both
government
and individuals can implement to tackle this issue.

On the on hand, the consequences of
climate
fluctuation are
disatrous
means that the
possiblility
for
people
to
live
in harmony with it is
entirely
impossible.
For example
, with an unprecedented rise in sea level, those
people
who
live
in low-lying area are
obviously
succumb to fight this issue, which cause numerous imperative problems including famine, homelessness and even death. Another instance is that the long-lasting drought is the main culprit behind the ecological catastrophe. Not
only
do
people
struggle with water deficit
but
flora and fauna
also
face up with the destruction of natural habitat.

On the other hand
, both
government
and society
shouls
join
hand to conduct
many
effective campaigns to hinder or at least mitigate this problem. A simple measure would be for the
government
to impose strict laws to limit the carbon dioxide emissions or other pollutants which lead to global warming. What’s more, They should invest on renewable energy production from solar, wind or geothermal pressure, which in turn, conserve energy and reverse
climate
change
. Individual is
also
of paramount importance in solving this issue by limiting their adverse impact on the environment
as well
as
climate
. In lieu of using private vehicles, they can
use
public transport like buses or trains which play a key role in cutting down on exhaust fumes discharged from cars

In conclusion
, Although
people
have to
make
great endeavors to
prevent
climate
instability, they should find
many
efficient
sollutions
to avoid it,
otherwise
, natural calamities will take a toll on their life.
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IELTS essay Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find way to live with it.

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